'Can you forgive..'
A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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"Whenever
i sail on my shallowest rift..your soul binds me with the thread of
every saline drop..!! I badly need you, today..and you are not here..!!!
My words have ruffled the blend..!!!
Can you forgive..???"
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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi
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Thank you Ms. Priyanka Natesh..!!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Oh! You just write the most concise and loveliest poems!! I loved this one too! Thank you :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Thank you Ms. Sarah..!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Man waiting for forgiveness sucks! great write!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Thank you Ms. Devil's Angel..!!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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nice.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Thank you Ms. #1 Devoted Soap Fan..!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Short and sweet...to the point!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Thank you Coyote Sir..!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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A amazing poem. In so few words create great emotion and desire. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Added on March 9, 2011
Last Updated on March 9, 2011
Author
PriyankaabhilaashiJaipur, India
About
A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!!
A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City.
You may read me here also:
http://enri.. more..
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