'Deepest grain..'

'Deepest grain..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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For someone who was my soul for ages! As the world has changed..i have decided to move ahead towards my Dream..!!Thanks a zillion tons for making me what i am today..!!!Thank you for pushing me away!

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"You walked past my heart..
Ripping my soul apart..
Placed you at the highest cadre..
You crushed emotional ladder..
What did you gain through this..
The silliest of me will surely miss..
Deepest grain of the core..
Will shed the memories more..

I am happy you left..
No one will dare theft..

Thank you, for you made me strong..
Will mold, so nothing seems wrong..!!!!"

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20th July, 2011

© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi


Author's Note

Priyankaabhilaashi
Pure raw words..!!!

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Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such emotion...good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Ms. Sweets..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Tate Morgan Sir..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is sad =/
but I'm glad you thought of the good things you got (:
Great work!
I enjoyed this a lot :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


In the united states it is the men who crush the souls of women But in india the class system has this just the opposite The women crush the men

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Tandi..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nicely written with lots of emotion. Strong words to bring it together.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Ms. Marie Harrison..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Stream of powerful emotions!
I love the strength of your words

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 20, 2011
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Priyankaabhilaashi
Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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