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just d beggining :)

just d beggining :)

A Poem by thetoxiclove
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just a try and not so beautiful but lovely one :)

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you are too far to reach,
            too close to hug,
            too big to fit and
           too small to leave........
                                 I know you will always be the one i cannot have but you will always be the one i desired for.........love you forever :) <3

© 2014 thetoxiclove


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thetoxiclove
please tell me what all i should improve..thank you :)

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pretty good, priya. you could have made it bigger with a little more vocab. a very good attempt, anyways.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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thetoxiclove

hyderabad, kukatpally, India



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