A Poem by prodicallife

A luscious night with unkown love of the life.


That’s gracious

The way you looked at me last night

The way you kissed the wine,

Which was dancing in the glass to have kissed you.

The way your look sung the luscious you


That’s mesmerizing

The way you toned the bottle

With the juicy lips and toppled with those

Gleaming demands of your eyes.


That’s turmoil

The way you wanted me

In your dreams, in your arms and everywhere

In you.

The way you bespeak

The felicity of desire


That’s seducing

The way you unwrapped the last button of

The ensemble.

The red smock shifting down

Slowly then, swiftly to

Get intimate with the floor exactly

The way you got me.

That’s faithful

The way your fingers

Invade, explore, greet and leave

Every instance of me.

The way you pouch my lips into you

And add a strawberry flavor in between

To never end that delicious feast of you.


That’s memorable

The way you left the bed with wrinkles

The red straps of party gown

The twisted un-rested cap of the wine bottle

The grey ash of the smoke

That suffocated the room

The fragrance of the Gucci

The last fading flavor of strawberry that twisted my mind

To the flows last night.

The last paper holder which held a message

That you purchased the last night.

© 2013 prodicallife

Author's Note

That's more of a story come flow write.

Hope you guys like the story.

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I really like the formatting of this one, the flow of words comes smooth and flowing. It is just right to entice every reader of how the night goes so well. Very nice!

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

Dear Captain,

Thanks for reviewing my work.

I am much respected with those.. read more

10 Years Ago

with much respect from me as well, you are certainly welcome :)
I like the way this is tale like within a poem. Beautifully executed! All elements met to seduce...impress...engage and act on...wonderfully expressed. Much enjoyed x

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

Dear Poppy,

I am much respected with that wonderful piece of appreciation over my work... read more

10 Years Ago

Be blessed too and most welcome!
I loved this, as you said, it has somewhat of a story feel to it, but still holds lots of poetic value. I for one happen to like the story feel of it, with just the right amount of poetic measure to pull everything together and create a beautiful piece. Wonderfully done.


Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

Dear Dewella,

It's great to hear from you after a long while.

Thanks a lot.. read more
What an enticing write... you etched each stanza into a work of art... molding a vision of intimate moments, each line drawing her seductive curves to near perfection. Well done, my friend! ~xoxo~

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

Dear Robbie,

You appreciate my work so well, that I feel really encouraged and enthusia.. read more
I love how you've constructed the poem, how each stanza has its own title beginning with "that's". It's creative, appealing and very fitting also. Your words are colorful and sensual, a canvas in which I saw a beautiful woman. It was a pleasure for me going through these lines of yours.

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

Dear Michelle,

Hope you are doing great!!

How appreciative it is to know t.. read more
Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

You're welcome, and I'm doing good, thank you very much! Hope you feel the same. Have a splendid day.. read more

10 Years Ago

Thanks Michelle.

It's great to hear from you :)

Stay blessed
Prodica.. read more
A amazing use of description. Your words took me to good places and the description create good vision. Each set of lines told a story and brought the reader into the tale in the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

Dear Coyote,

Thanks for the appreciating words.

It feels great.

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6 Reviews
Added on December 5, 2013
Last Updated on December 5, 2013



jaipur, rajasthan, India

i`m a writer of my own destination, Hi this is Saurabh Bhatia...random thotsss invade my mind all the time....LOVE is what i would like to specify izzz my favourite field.. LETA HU TERA NAAM HR PAL .. more..


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