Dream-The dark hood

“Dream”-The dark hood

 

Eidolic night with a trepidation in my heart

The barrage of the rushing droplets

Slashing through me apart

 

The Lament of the cannibals

The battle of the wind

The chase of the broken leaves

The dark sky arena with tint.

 

Remorse with the dented weapons

Envy with an aged hood

Solicitation to creep death

All together they stood.

 

Scraggy hood with tainted stiletto

Late walk covered low

Bruised face sutured more

Clumsy limbs touched ago.

 

A daemons gladiator

An aged, rough, veteran fighter

Red blooded Gorilla eyes

Bare muscles Doughtier.

 

Duple of him shading the little gleam

Ahead the old, scraggy grey hood nothing seemed

Spurting the army braided me in

With a jolt I realized I was dreaming in.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Let me know how do you like it, a jolt to a dream.

Reviews

[SaraJayne96]

I really like this poem :) Every word, every line, pulls you in deeper and almost to the point where you can almost imagine yourself in the characters position and then you jolt both the character and the reader out of the daze with your amazing plot twist :) Great job Prodical!

-Lady Jayne

[prodicallife]

Dear Jayne,

I am much appreciated with those inspiring words of yours.

Thanks a lot for pulling out time and reading my words.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[SaraJayne96]

You're very welcome Prodical :) you deserve it

[Kaylie]

I love the way this poem was constructed. Powerful words and a powerful theme.

[prodicallife]

Dear Kaylie,

Thanks for reviewing my work with such appreciating words.

Please stay connected.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. I like all the characters you brought to life in your words. Good dreams are filled with imagination and good places. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[prodicallife]

Dear Coyote,

Hope you are doing well!!

Thanks a lot for pulling out to review my work with your remarkable words of appreciation.

I am respected!!

Thanks,

Regards
Prodical

[Darkstole]

Wonderful, well organized to be unorganized exactly like dreams.

Well written.

Nice

Darkstole

[prodicallife]

Thanks a lot Darkstole for your words of appreciation.

I am honored.

Regards
Prodical

[Dewella~Vintella]

I loved this, especially the wide range of descriptions and words that pulled the whole piece together and shaped vivid imagery. I think what I liked most is that, with the theme of this being a dream, you didn't use conventional flow as far as a timeline goes. Dream are never stable, and are always changing direction; you conveyed that aspect spot on without the piece seeming jumbled or confusing. The flow was perfect, and the rhythm flawless.

Wonderfully done. ^^

[prodicallife]

Dear Dewella,

Woww!! that is so true.

Yes Dreams are something that you could exactly quote them as building blocks. Once you get to see the entire big bulk of the tune arranged in a pattern with the originality that makes you realize that this world you are living in now is realistic.

Once you drip yourself completely into the world, an instance marks in and signs of the reality with a jolt.

However, when you get up in the morning and try to analyze what was that world all about, BOOMMMMMMM every thing wipes away like a flash.

The most amazing state is that, when you try to arrange all the events and craft the supposed irrelevant story.

Funny but true.

Thanks a lot for reviewing my work.

I am respected.

Regards
Prodical

[Michelle N. H.]

That was an intense nightmare. It made me realize how long it's been since I've had a really bad dream. You managed to create a nice flow and you are articulate, which made my reading experience pleasant and vivid. As we dream, the events taking place do not occur in an orderly manner, and I got that feeling from reading your poem. It was as if everything happened in short and sharp flashes comparable to a rapid heartbeat in fear.. Loved it, thanks for sharing :)

[prodicallife]

Dear Michelle,

Firstly, thanks for reviewing my work, I am honored.

It is really whelming to know that I was able to drive you through that unrealistic world that I was trying to.

Yes I buy in with the fact that the dreams are most unstable unrealistic world happening.

You feel restless, unsatisfied, all emotions mixed up and finally either you drop the unrealistic moment or you keep up the battle to get those instances right.

Amazing truth!!

Thanks for reviewing once again.

Stay blessed.

Regards
Prodical