finding your way

finding your way

A Poem by Steven
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it is just a poem about the sun and the moon and how they are lighting up the path of some traveler.

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the golden rays of the sun,

brush against the water's calm surface

illumanateing it,

 

the silver light of the moon,

lands in puddles,

breaking through the forest canopy

 

in their infanant beauty,

they glow,

illumating the path of a lonely traveler

casting shadows but helping him find his way.

© 2008 Steven


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well done; every traveler needs the light to find the way; you have strong imagery and the light shines bright

ven

Posted 15 Years Ago


I absolutley adore this.
Amazing job.
My favorite stanza was sthe 2nd one. There just something i love about the reflection of the moon on water.
It's sorta mesmerising.

great job. Awsome write.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 15 Years Ago



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hiii my name is Steven =] well i really cant write these thinks for shittt but owell. umm i'm gay im single i'm an ok writer i guess but everyone tells me i am really good talk to meeee :) i h.. more..

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