My Day

My Day

A Poem by Cameron Koontz
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A cynical poem

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I freeze from the cold
The bus smells like mold
This routine is getting a little old

I go to the school
Breakfast is cruel
Sitting at a table just to play cool

First half of the day
goes on the same way
I'm everybody's b***h, I do what they say

After that comes lunch
I have a little munch
I tried my little carton of fruit punch

I trudge through part Two
Nothings really new 
The interesting parts are just too few

I arrive at home 
I write this poem
And then I give up

© 2013 Cameron Koontz


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A normal day for a kid in school. My poor daughter love and hate school. Believe it or not. One day you will wish for the days when school was life and friends are near. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Another mundane day of high school... I Felt exactly this way almost my entire senior year after the first year. Your lines about the meals are great. haha. Michelle Obama's revamping of school lunches kept me starving the whole year through. Things get better for a while once you graduate though! You'll be looking forward to new things and new people! Hang in there don't "give up"!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hah... I remember feeling like that. Actually, I still feel like that some times. The only difference is that I take the public bus and I go to college.

I can't sit here and tell you to TRY to have fun because... God... I know that is near impossible to do.

When you say, "I arrive at home, I write this poem, and then I give up" it makes me think that perhaps you need a little umph in your life. If every day is boring and cruel to you, then you need a change. >_>

I know, I'm being Captain Obvious right now... I wish I could help you out with some more substance. Try something new... if you are getting close to graduating, then that is definitely something to look forward to. Just keep doing you and one day you can leave home and explore the world, and do things that you like to do. It will liberate you. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A normal day for a kid in school. My poor daughter love and hate school. Believe it or not. One day you will wish for the days when school was life and friends are near. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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