Just Assaying

Just Assaying

A Poem by Pete
"

Pursue some path, however narrow and crooked, in which you can walk with love and reverence. - Thoreau

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A fool keeps walking the same path that leads nowhere until he's desperate and lost.
Faith cannot arrive until blindness departs.
Even roots endeavor for something more when surrounded by nothing.
Regardless of what the way may bring.
With a heavy heart and weary sigh.
They simply try ...



© 2020 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"When we walk, we naturally go to the fields and woods: what would become of us, if we walked only in a garden or a mall?" - Thoreau

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"Even roots endeavor for something more when surrounded by nothing" could become a classic quote, Pete. I find so much richness in the few words and verses. The above quote might explain why some stray from relationships and their faith. They become disoriented and dismayed.

This poem speaks to the value of perspective, changing our perspectives, maybe walking a different path or with different people. The poem stands alone as exceptional. That photo could be inspiration for its own poem, but fits well here. Nice work, Pete.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i very much like and appreciate your thoughts on the matter r.e. they reinforce what my muse mr. t .. read more
R.E. Ray

4 Years Ago

You’re welcome, Pete. We share many thoughts. Look forward to more. :)



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To respond to the question : They know that's why they repeat.Nothing is made with unconsciousness.We go to the path we are used to. It takes a while for us to change the path.It's like we are under the traffic light always red. We will move only when it turns green.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i appreciate your astute observation - yes, we tend to take the path of least resistance because it .. read more
Many don't even bother to walk anymore...hiking the trails, climbing mountains, exploring the outdoors...
no, instead, the only walking we are doing is in Malls and from the car to the restaurant...
becoming an inert society...what is the logic in that?
i like this expressive piece...and Bruce Hornsby rocks...
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

what you say so sad but true j. the outdoors with its natural beauty is my health club. thoreau c.. read more
"Even roots endeavor for something more when surrounded by nothing" could become a classic quote, Pete. I find so much richness in the few words and verses. The above quote might explain why some stray from relationships and their faith. They become disoriented and dismayed.

This poem speaks to the value of perspective, changing our perspectives, maybe walking a different path or with different people. The poem stands alone as exceptional. That photo could be inspiration for its own poem, but fits well here. Nice work, Pete.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i very much like and appreciate your thoughts on the matter r.e. they reinforce what my muse mr. t .. read more
R.E. Ray

4 Years Ago

You’re welcome, Pete. We share many thoughts. Look forward to more. :)
This poem seems to be saying that while mindless repetition and blind faith lead nowhere, still one must not give up, whatever life may bring. To which I say amen. Those who fold their tents too soon may soon be checking out.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

thanks for sharing thoughts j. the b. i second that amen ...:)

2 chronicles 15:7 "Bu.. read more
Some people will never learn, they keep making the same mistskes, are not prepared to try new things. That old saying came to mind 'you can't teach an old dog new tricks". Great little write here Pete. Well done.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

true but easier said than done - so often we tend to get stuck. thanks chris! ... :)
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Takes a lot of effort to change the habits of a lifetime. Hope you are well Pete.
I believe the song is more about the injustice of big corporations. Your poem sheds light with wise words that are very true Pete. Nice job.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

yes, you are correct about the song. now if i could only follow my own advice. thank you for shari.. read more
About your author's note: Many many are doing just this. Going for a walk to malls and on city roads. About the poem: yes I agree but no one can really help old fools. Educate the new generation.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

i'd much rather walk in natural surroundings than man-made. so true - an old fool is the worst of t.. read more
A fool keeps walking the same path that leads nowhere until he is desperate and lost.

Yes. They never learn. Great stuff written here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

4 Years Ago

is not always easy to do as such. our eyes must be open and our hearts receptive and willing. than.. read more
AJNJ

4 Years Ago

I’m new to this writing business. I’m no sir. But welcome anyway ;)

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