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A Poem by Pete
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Knowledge does not come to us in details, but in flashes of light from heaven. - Thoreau

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walking tenuously on silvery diaphanous clouds
stepping tremulously over in-betweens 
opaline breath against a chatoyan sky

in the presence of nacreous cherubim
feathery rustle of rollicking wings of impertinance
halos bending in cheekiness
against a backdrop of fortissimo

tintinnabullations
unrelenting faith delivered directly to God's doorstep
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rich divinity
thank Heaven
his soulful package has finally arrived



© 2020 Pete


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Pete
"We now no longer camp as for a night, but have settled down on earth and forgotten heaven." - Thoreau

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This might be the most perfect union I've seen so far, where you combine your love of complex words, yet putting it together in a way that's poetic & light & flowing, not a bit "cerebral" *wink! wink!* This reminds me a little bit of Jack (sinister potatoe), the way he lays down incomprehensively complex strings of words that come off as musical to me. I mean, the way the sound & the rhythm happens along every line, plus the way the mind goes off on a melody of ideas sparked by your words . . . definitely for word lovers . . . almost had an orgasm when you pulled this out of your bag of tricks: "tintinnabullations" . . . SO jealous! Gotta get back to poetry! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

perhaps some of your literary influence has rubbed off on us. after all, i know how you like delive.. read more
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

Thru pandemic upheavals, I've lost my favorite Fedex man, my fantasy for years, I'll miss his big bu.. read more



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This might be the most perfect union I've seen so far, where you combine your love of complex words, yet putting it together in a way that's poetic & light & flowing, not a bit "cerebral" *wink! wink!* This reminds me a little bit of Jack (sinister potatoe), the way he lays down incomprehensively complex strings of words that come off as musical to me. I mean, the way the sound & the rhythm happens along every line, plus the way the mind goes off on a melody of ideas sparked by your words . . . definitely for word lovers . . . almost had an orgasm when you pulled this out of your bag of tricks: "tintinnabullations" . . . SO jealous! Gotta get back to poetry! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

3 Years Ago

perhaps some of your literary influence has rubbed off on us. after all, i know how you like delive.. read more
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

Thru pandemic upheavals, I've lost my favorite Fedex man, my fantasy for years, I'll miss his big bu.. read more

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