Talking to God

Talking to God

A Poem by Pete
"

When you knock, ask to see God — none of the servants. - Thoreau

"
The Burning Bush | The Bible Through Artists' Eyes
Moses before the Burning Bush FETI (ca. 1613-14)

what do you say
what do you hear

is it inside of your soul or ringing in your ear

do you take off your shoes
do you sing him the blues

do you ask nicely or make demands
do you fold your hands

are you down upon your knees
do you even bother to say, "please"

are you addressing a peer or the boss
is it the one hanging on a cross

when your prayers are answered are you awed
do you even bother to rise up and applaud

is the conversation by way of tin cans with string
after all, he is a king

do you think its a fraud
talking to god





© 2020 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"It's only by forgetting yourself that you draw near to God." - Thoreau

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Nicely rhymed meditation on the nature of prayer. The great German mystic Meister Eckhart said that if you could say only one prayer in your life, a simple word of thanks would be sufficient.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Pete

3 Years Ago

sounds good to me j the b. pray on ... :)

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