THIS is POWERFUL!! one of your best short poems I ever read from You! to be true, honest NAKED to ourselves and our souls it's how we evolve, if we hide behind our truth we will stay at the same grade. I also see here how for example the first murder will it lead you for another one or will it stops, same for prostitution, when you lose feelings, and the sense of right and wrong it becomes like a habit, you are empty and simply don't care, all starts after the first experience. again such a grad poetry dear Pete I applaud You loudly! did You hear it there? ;)
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
wow. a single sin opens a pandora's box, a chain reaction with far-reaching repercussions. like pu.. read morewow. a single sin opens a pandora's box, a chain reaction with far-reaching repercussions. like pulling a thread on a sweater unraveling. i think one of the saddest parts of life is losing our innocence. we must be ever vigilant to guard truth and cling to it - not an easy thing to resist going with the flow as you mention ... :)
" a single sin opens a pandora's box" EXACTLY I didn't know how to express it poor my English :( and.. read more" a single sin opens a pandora's box" EXACTLY I didn't know how to express it poor my English :( and thank You :) " I think one of the saddest parts of life is losing our innocence" it is, and again the sentence that was lingering in my head yesterday and I also thought of putting it as my status here is "I wish I never grow up".
2 Years Ago
i compare myself now to when i was a child and it is so sad what life does to us. i too wish that i.. read morei compare myself now to when i was a child and it is so sad what life does to us. i too wish that i never grew up - is why i appreciate the writings of thoreau ... :)
2 Years Ago
Sigh dear Pete! I am pretty sure that your inner child is still safe inside like mine, I feel this w.. read moreSigh dear Pete! I am pretty sure that your inner child is still safe inside like mine, I feel this whenever I read You, You have a pure heart for sure :)
THIS is POWERFUL!! one of your best short poems I ever read from You! to be true, honest NAKED to ourselves and our souls it's how we evolve, if we hide behind our truth we will stay at the same grade. I also see here how for example the first murder will it lead you for another one or will it stops, same for prostitution, when you lose feelings, and the sense of right and wrong it becomes like a habit, you are empty and simply don't care, all starts after the first experience. again such a grad poetry dear Pete I applaud You loudly! did You hear it there? ;)
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
wow. a single sin opens a pandora's box, a chain reaction with far-reaching repercussions. like pu.. read morewow. a single sin opens a pandora's box, a chain reaction with far-reaching repercussions. like pulling a thread on a sweater unraveling. i think one of the saddest parts of life is losing our innocence. we must be ever vigilant to guard truth and cling to it - not an easy thing to resist going with the flow as you mention ... :)
" a single sin opens a pandora's box" EXACTLY I didn't know how to express it poor my English :( and.. read more" a single sin opens a pandora's box" EXACTLY I didn't know how to express it poor my English :( and thank You :) " I think one of the saddest parts of life is losing our innocence" it is, and again the sentence that was lingering in my head yesterday and I also thought of putting it as my status here is "I wish I never grow up".
2 Years Ago
i compare myself now to when i was a child and it is so sad what life does to us. i too wish that i.. read morei compare myself now to when i was a child and it is so sad what life does to us. i too wish that i never grew up - is why i appreciate the writings of thoreau ... :)
2 Years Ago
Sigh dear Pete! I am pretty sure that your inner child is still safe inside like mine, I feel this w.. read moreSigh dear Pete! I am pretty sure that your inner child is still safe inside like mine, I feel this whenever I read You, You have a pure heart for sure :)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..
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