Magic Marker

Magic Marker

A Poem by Pete
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Be yourself, not your idea of what you think somebody else’s idea of yourself should be. - Thoreau

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© 2022 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"Write while the heat is in you. The writer who postpones the recording of his thoughts uses an iron which has cooled to burn a hole with. He cannot inflame the minds of his audience." - Thoreau

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Powerful stuff Pete, read several times. Such a high impact poem that delivers a punch to the midriff. Winded I can only say it’s one of your best.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Week Ago

wow, quite a compliment coming from you especially when you're doubled over. we can all use a good .. read more
andrew mitchell

1 Week Ago

Lol no seriously really loved this one, so well written too. Hats off to you!
When you've gotta go, youve gotta go.

How very creative Pete. That would take a steady hand :))

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Week Ago

thanks chris. nowhere else to go but outside in the park down by the water. everyone does it (guy.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Week Ago

Ha! Too much info. Too much imagery Pete. Have a good weekend :)
Ah ha Pete ..peeing in the snow
now we know.. JK...seriously
like the play on tease and eyes
always good to be yourself
the heck what others may think
nice write..hope the new year
is being kind to you...

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Week Ago

lol. innocent little me - i've never done that! thanks fran. the new year will be what we make o.. read more
As has oft been said, never eat the yellow snow.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

1 Week Ago

words to live by ... :)

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Pete
Pete

Boston, MA



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I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..

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