Believe me

A Poem by Kayleen

Why is it so hard?

You think that I deceive you
I only want to please you
Deny that I would hold you
Even though I told you
My heart is yours for taking
It breaks; you think im faking...

© 2013 Kayleen

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child of God

So little but yet so powerful I love the directness of it such raw emotions with so little words thank you for this read
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

Honest and direct words. You said enough. Left the reader with the want to know more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago

shocker

It's really good and the dramatic change feels right in place and seems just about right when it comes to a some love

Posted 9 Years Ago

Jack Kennedy

This is a short but effective and believe me a good poem that I feel is well written! Good job

Posted 9 Years Ago

kitty cat

thank i loved it and you can add me if you want

Posted 10 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 22, 2013
Last Updated on January 22, 2013
Tags: love, hurt, earnest, relationships, deceit, trust, broken, confused, sad, desire, longing

Author

Kayleen

Anaheim, CA

About

Kayleen. 22. California. I Like Old School Punk Rock, Electro nonsense, and Katy Perry. The Mighty f*****g Boosh. Everything else amazing overseas we dont have here. I make movies, bad decisions.. more..