Believe me

Believe me

A Poem by Kayleen
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Why is it so hard?

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You think that I deceive you
I only want to please you
Deny that I would hold you
Even though I told you
My heart is yours for taking
It breaks; you think im faking...

© 2013 Kayleen


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Kayleen
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So little but yet so powerful I love the directness of it such raw emotions with so little words thank you for this read
100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honest and direct words. You said enough. Left the reader with the want to know more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


It's really good and the dramatic change feels right in place and seems just about right when it comes to a some love

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a short but effective and believe me a good poem that I feel is well written! Good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


thank i loved it and you can add me if you want

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 22, 2013
Last Updated on January 22, 2013
Tags: love, hurt, earnest, relationships, deceit, trust, broken, confused, sad, desire, longing

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Kayleen
Kayleen

Anaheim, CA



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Kayleen. 22. California. I Like Old School Punk Rock, Electro nonsense, and Katy Perry. The Mighty f*****g Boosh. Everything else amazing overseas we dont have here. I make movies, bad decisions.. more..

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