Drugged and Dirty

Drugged and Dirty

A Poem by Kayleen
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Time Wastes Everything.

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False hope
Anchor Rope
Dragged and Hurting
Drugged and Dirty
Empty Bottles
Empty Needles
Distort the Way
that Hopeless feels
Another Hit
Another Shot
Another Reason I Forgot
Another Lie
Another Truth
Another Day
of Wasted Youth
Good for Nothing
Ambition Dead
Another Day
Inside my head
Dont want to think
Dont want to feel
Keep me Numb
Kill Whats Real.













© 2014 Kayleen


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Kayleen
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An excellent piece of writing, I can relate, as I dabbled in the same scene in my youth, but somehow still managed to function in a "normal" world. Got away from it, but I can see how a person can easily slip over and let the substances rule their. life. Well done portraying that in these strong words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a beautiful write on a really tough topics you got hit it right on the nail thank you for sharing I enjoyed this read I have made some decisions that I regret some really stupid things

Posted 6 Years Ago


What I like about this is a lot of people can relate. Even if the person didn't experience this life themselves, they know someone who did. It seems like you have a real grasp on people and the general life.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I can relate! Very well written poem and was it weird that found the flow amazingly appealing? Anyway, a very awesome poem, well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow Kayleen.. don´t know what your so impressed by me for.. this was insanely good, hit me right in the heart. It was just so sad but brilliant, badass scream of help in a way.. I don´t know how to desribe it wel.. just wow, your awezome

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kayleen

6 Years Ago

you'd be surprised how few people can even picture themselves in other peoples shoes let alone write.. read more
Johanna

6 Years Ago

I´ll remember from now on :) but I must say that I also think you are really talented after reading.. read more
Kayleen

6 Years Ago

lol thank you!
Wow, very moving and direct poem. I could feel the wasted life through your words and their need to continue to numb to hide pain. I really like the way you conveyed the emotions through this poem. Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great rhythm. Really pulled me in.

Consider stanza of four lines each, with the exception of "another hit .. I forgot".
OR consider punctuation where you would typically break for stanzas. I recommend this because the repetition will stand stronger if it isn't all in one line.

Missing an apostrophe in three of the last four lines.


Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An excellent piece of writing, I can relate, as I dabbled in the same scene in my youth, but somehow still managed to function in a "normal" world. Got away from it, but I can see how a person can easily slip over and let the substances rule their. life. Well done portraying that in these strong words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is excellent ! Perfect words that tell it like it is and a great rhythm throughout. Penny :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the fast pace of this poem! It goes really well with the story of an addict that is oblivious to what is real. An excellent write!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Tags: wasted, youth, angst, depression, numb, dark, bleak, internal, thought, thinking, sad, sadness, loss, lost, denial

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Kayleen
Kayleen

Anaheim, CA



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Kayleen. 22. California. I Like Old School Punk Rock, Electro nonsense, and Katy Perry. The Mighty f*****g Boosh. Everything else amazing overseas we dont have here. I make movies, bad decisions.. more..

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