Not Capable

Not Capable

A Poem by Kayleen

I want to be expendable
Can't pull off dependable
Give me something Chemical
Mentally I'm Skeletal
F**k me like I'm rape-able
Kill me; I'm not capable





© 2018 Kayleen


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This feels like something you wrote quietly but needs to be shouted at the world. Maybe words directed at you hurt you more than something physical allowing you to write something like this

Posted 3 Years Ago


Deeply emotional and hurting. I can relate this pain to many others, including me, Even tho it was painful, its still a great writing.
100/100


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is mighty powerful stuff, Kayleen. Raw degenerate expressionism. Would be nice to see further experimentation with form and structure, how they can be used to express the brutality already present in the text.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Really like this,so different to most of what is posted.By the way,with a little tweaking your biog would make a really good poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow...not sure have any other words....this is a very powerful piece and I really enjoyed it! Hey look more words.....

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Kayleen
Kayleen

Anaheim, CA



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Kayleen. 22. California. I Like Old School Punk Rock, Electro nonsense, and Katy Perry. The Mighty f*****g Boosh. Everything else amazing overseas we dont have here. I make movies, bad decisions.. more..

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