Only You!

Only You!

A Poem by Raven Radke
"

someone i love

"

You are the only one who

makes me smile the most..

You are the only one who

holds me very close..

You are the only one who

I am writing for..

 

You are the person

who makes my day..

You are the person

who can tell me they love me

and actually mean it..

You are the reason this poem is coming alive..

 

You make me smile, when I'm upset..

You make me laugh, on my darkest hours..

You hold me close,when I need you there..

You are the reason, I'm smiling again..

You found me with a broken heart..

but that's all different now...

           

                          January 7, 2010

                                     Raven Radke

© 2010 Raven Radke


Author's Note

Raven Radke
I'm in a very happy relationship oh and the picture up there before I found the exact guy i was looking for

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Zak
This piece just convey's emotion so well. It seems that when you write, you do it incredibly passionately, yet concisely. You put yourself out there and cut people about you to the heart with your passion.

The line "you are the reason this poem is coming alive..." just puts us right there. It portrays so much how our love for others inspires and helps us write. I like it! XD

Zak

Posted 11 Years Ago


old poem of a guy i used to love

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is a good poem
very well done!

it made me smile :)

definitely getting a 100% rating from me :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


You can tell by reading this you are very happy. It's nice to have someone that can make you laugh and just be there for you. I liked the line:
"You are the reason this poem is coming alive.."






Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 7, 2010
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