My Imagination

My Imagination

A Poem by Raven Radke
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boredism

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You lied, cheated,and broke my heart

but you can't get away from what you did...

You try to get away with what you started

but the truth is you won't survive what will come to you...

Do my eyes make you see the truth?

 

Do the memories hurt?

Does the hole in your heart hurt?

Do you cry endless tears for me?

Are you happy with yourself?

What do you see when you look in the mirror?

Who do you pray for at night?

What do you feel when you see my face?

I hope it hurts to look in my eyes...

 

My eyes are icy blue that will

freeze your heart and make you bleed

Cry your tears all you want

and bow down to my feet and beg for mercy

I laugh at your pittiness and watch you die

The pain hurts doesn't it?

 

You cut my heart now it's my turn

I watch the elegant, bloody blade slice your heart

oh so delicately and watch your heart bleed

and laugh with craziness and hatred

as you hear my cries...

"I warned you, but I guess you never got the message!

It hurts doesn't it? You tried your best to escape me after buring my happiness into the ground, but you failed.

Now you see what you have created and now I finished the deed."

My eyes see into youir soul and let you see

the truth...

 

               January 29,2010

                             Raven Radke

© 2010 Raven Radke


Author's Note

Raven Radke
See where my boredism takes me?
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WOW I think someone was a little mad.....?



Posted 11 Years Ago


Ha, boredom can sure bring out some interesting writes. :]

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Overall it could be a good poem. The many dots distracted me though, & there is one typo at the bottom, youir, instead without the i.
The flow could have been better but keep up the good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good, very good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really good.
great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Holy f*****g s**t. Ok, yeah... Wow. I'm speechless. Like.. Literally. Wow. That was... Something. Definatly something right there. Lemme see if I can blink. Hold on. Ok, I blinked, but my mouth's still open. Ok, this was Amazing. Amazing with a capital A. Defiantily. I have no idea what to say I really don't. I'm lost. This was......... Wow. Amazing write, Amazing detail (thats for sure), Amazing words and pain and everything. You displayed a LOT of emotion here. Good job.

--Blood (AmAzing).

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very nice, twisted and biting!
I love this! It reminds me a little of my own work :D which to me is what interests me most. Wonderful piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Such a brilliant taste of pain and darkness. Your words cut like a knife and I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


very well written :} i liked it!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Nowhere land, TN



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