Thoughts..

Thoughts..

A Poem by Raven Radke
"

ehh okay i guess

"

I thought we had a connection

Something very strong

But now it's all over

I guess I was wrong...

 

I thought of you today

and yesterday as well

To know that you hate me

I guess we'll never do..

 

The memories come to me like a steel magnet

I try my best to stay away

but I can't hide from them forever

I guess I should tell the truth

and let you hear my thoughts..

 

"I wish I could see you,

I wish you knew my life,

I wish you could be there to catch me when I fall...

but I know that you hate me and

don't care at all..."

So 'til this day I mope around

and wonder on and on again

Why do you underestimate me?

Why did you have to kill my heart

Why can't I show you that I am the one?

How did we get to this day without a single word?

 

You say I'm worth nothing and that you don't care,

but the pain and love in your eyes lets me know I'm still there

Another dreadful day appears and not another word is said

I wish you could know

I miss you so much...

Febrauary 8th, 2010

  Raven Radke

© 2010 Raven Radke


Author's Note

Raven Radke
..just another oldie..

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very beautiful and so full of emotion!

well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, I think this is amazing. And I don't know if it was Kiss the Rain by Yiruma playing as I read it, but it nearly made me want to weep.

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow i loved this piece it showed so much pain but at the same time it was BEAUTIFUL! very impressed :) Great Write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deep, emotional, sad... Dark. Wow, I absolutely love it.! I can totally relate to this, which is definatly a good thing. Keep writing. You're amazing.


Posted 11 Years Ago


this is really good ... i like it...

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is a really emotional poem.
you kill it with the authors note :/
great poem tho

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Raven Radke
Raven Radke

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