..White Crayon..

..White Crayon..

A Poem by Raven Radke
"

..Why am I invisible..?

"

I see you but you don't see me

I call out to you but you don't hear me

What am I to you?

What can I do to make you see me?

I don't know what I did..

Please look at me..

 

Silent cries from inside my room

from deep inside my heart

I'm afraid to cry aloud because it's to

hard for me to be questioned by you and tell you the truth becuase

you treat me like the White crayon out of them all

Invisible to the eye and not important..

© 2010 Raven Radke


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Very strong emotions lay over this piece, I like the comparison to a white crayon, although....If you look closely enough it is there, and it makes a huge difference. :) nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just happened to be listening to 'Rolling Stones-Can always get what you want' when I read this.

Excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i know the feeling of being invisible, unimportant. very strong emotions in this , great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Good rhythm

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Raven Radke
Raven Radke

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