Drunk Goggles

Drunk Goggles

A Poem by LynLee

Drunk Goggles

 

 

People seemed to act

like the objects

were moving

 

People would

sway back and forth

and act

like the objects

weren't there

 

I

myself

did not try

these devil goggles

because I

will never be

in that

position

 

© 2010 LynLee


Author's Note

LynLee
this was so weird because we did the drunk goggles at school and i had to write a reveiw on what i saw and i wrote it in a poem way and i was going to put it up here but couldnt find the time and then my friend sweet pea invited me to the We dont Drink group so I thought! Coincidence! weird huh?

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I have no idea what drunk goggles are, so I'm blaming ignorance on the lack of understanding. Your poem is fascinating in its descriptions. I'll make sure to acquaint myself with these goggles.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 8 Years Ago


^_^
Yeah, those Drunk Goggles are quite familiar. I had to wear 'em in order to pass Health a couple of years ago and I was tripping all over myself!


Posted 8 Years Ago


You are every good writer. Being drunk and seeing through drunk goggles can twist you up. Your description was very good. It is important in a life to have control over your life and condition. People will try to take advantage. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I understood this. Haha I remember middle school health class and college psychology when we did that. So much (oh and espcially at driving school).
ROFL!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lol i done this last week

Posted 9 Years Ago


I had to read this a few times.. but I liked the fact that you gave the reader something to think about.. While others wanted to find out what it's like to be drunk.. there you are.. knowing there was no need.. since you would never have to worry about it. It's the best way to think!! Thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Intresting. I liked it, great veiw on people.

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow this was awesome! i really liked this! nicely done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


haha i remember that day of health, That was awesome...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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