Sign of peace

        What would Christ do if he

        were here today?

        Dictate a rewrite of his bible?

        Ask us to learn from his death?

        No, because he's tired of all

        the hollow words and he's tired

        of all the death.

        He'd simply say;

       " I am the sign of peace,

        read it, understand it,

        live it, for all I really am

        is love and life, and your 

        salvation depends on you,not me".        

Reviews

[Ruth]

And who could blame him when all is said and done...this world has become hostile in many ways...poignant piece...

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Well said dear poet. Great message what you can apply on anything what humans do. ILOVEIT

[zainul]

A great write indicating the state of anarchy of the present time.
No one including the natural justice system will take responsibility of such anarchy.
Hence,your poem is a timely warning for all offenders.
They may change for their own sake.
Thanks for sharing.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yes, our salvation depends oh us, on how we live this life. He is the way, he showed us how to be saved, but it depends on us if we will make it in the end.
Great piece!

[Rene Salinas]

What an intriguing writing. I felt immersed while reading it. Obvious disagreements as to the nature of the rhetorical question but that's neither here nor there as the message is absolutely a consequence of our times and that makes it more valuable than any form of analysis.

A treat to have read

Thankyou

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful poem I loved it.


thank you for sharing and for your
lovely review and comments you left
on my page.


Blessing. Benita/ Kindred poet

[MOON]

True , enjoyed this write.

[Linda alexander]

salvation depends on you,not me".
Great poem, he may say all those things, when it comes to salvation, he may compromise as he was kind to thieves, so he may do same thing to us, the robbers, am I partially right at least, take care