Wouldn't he

Wouldn't he

A Poem by paul sal.....

                                             Every now and then I cross paths
                                             with people who advocate adherence to
                                             God's laws as the means to salvation.
                                             The idea is that God wants us to follow
                                              his doctrines for, if we don't,
                                              we'll all be damned.
                                              My reaction to these people is as follows:
                                              If god is up there watching us; would't he
                                              be more pleased if humanity simply started
                                              to love each other because it seemed the
                                              sensible thing to do?
                                                  Think about it             

© 2014 paul sal.....


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I agree with you. It doesn't mean that if didn't follow one guidance of God, even though our moral code is much the same on his teaching, we are already damned. No one can judge that, only the higher being can. Nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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paul sal.....

9 Years Ago

we are not damned yet. it is a matter of choice.............
captain

9 Years Ago

true, true...

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