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A Poem by paul sal.....

                               Listen to Beethoven's 9th symphony .....
                               And wait for the finality
                               But the in between 
                               Leads us on a path of somber beauty
                               and gradually  takes us on journey 
                               of life as it should be, love, peace,
                               understanding, acceptance of the
                               differences between us,
                               for we are different, with our own 
                               private thoughts,and on occasion,    
                               we express them
                               and hope
                               others will listen.
                               It is not a matter of changing 
                               your mind, it is a matter of mind.
                               I do not mind if
                               you are who you are,
                               Please  forgive me for who I am.
                               I love who you are,
                               let us live in peace
                               and understand
                               we are different. 
                                WE are time so
                               lets make it remarkable!  

© 2014 paul sal.....


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Such and endearing feeling in this writing. It is imbued with a recognition of the fragility of being human. It is also charged or supercharged even with contrast as it starts with the recommendation to listen to the 9th in my modest a moment of "violent musicality" or "bombastic expression" yet not to be found on the polite accepting gesture of the words.

This is a great invitation for those listening.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Such and endearing feeling in this writing. It is imbued with a recognition of the fragility of being human. It is also charged or supercharged even with contrast as it starts with the recommendation to listen to the 9th in my modest a moment of "violent musicality" or "bombastic expression" yet not to be found on the polite accepting gesture of the words.

This is a great invitation for those listening.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Can I sum it live as yourself and let live others as themselves and be in harmony like a great symphony, hey poet you brought light to the basics that we are running away from, no civilization with suit and tie, but with positive mindset, enjoyed each lines

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen...very well said my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


"Please forgive me for who I am.
I love who you are,
let us live in peace
and understand
we are different and
live in peace."

A very wonderful message here. The poem was sooo good...:)...................

Posted 9 Years Ago


paul sal.....

9 Years Ago

seems to me religion is in a "box", perhaps it is Time to think outside those 4 walls
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Religion can be good or bad. Depends on what we get from the essence and apply it on ourselves. I'm .. read more
paul sal.....

3 Years Ago

5 years later, I hope you you have found spiritual, and
aspirtual (hope that is a word) life
sing a song of joy for love and understanging

Posted 9 Years Ago


Paul, I also don't mind who you are, I don't need you to change your mind, and I have forgiven you long ago.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frontier

9 Years Ago

I just became conscious that we have all forgiven each other long ago, but most have forgotten...
paul sal.....

9 Years Ago

I remember............
Frontier

9 Years Ago

:) .............

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paul sal.....
paul sal.....

Brentwood, NY



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Just a simple human wondering why we live in such turmoil and working in a small way to make it better....I like cats stevens, mozaart, neil young, beethoven, harry chapin, ernest chausson, passenger,.. more..

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