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A Poem by paul sal.....

                  

                                 here?

                           to

                     up               

               it

    Had 

 

                                     Exit out a door sometime

                                     and smile because you've left

                                     Don't look back or turn around

                                     or sell your perfect theft. 

© 2014 paul sal.....


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I'm smiling as I read this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


paul sal.....

5 Years Ago

why?...................................
Listmaker

5 Years Ago

Because it is a happy poem.
she stole my heart and reversed my logic on love...

never saw the theft happening...she was magic...

i like the staircase effect of the first stanza, fits the theme so well.

Posted 5 Years Ago


As genious as it is concise

Posted 5 Years Ago


paul sal.....

5 Years Ago

was hoping someone could relate

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Added on October 14, 2014
Last Updated on October 21, 2014

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paul sal.....
paul sal.....

Brentwood, NY



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Just a simple human wondering why we live in such turmoil and working in a small way to make it better....I like cats stevens, mozaart, neil young, beethoven, harry chapin, ernest chausson, passenger,.. more..

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