He doesn't know

He doesn't know

A Poem by qaralynn

He's the imperfectly perfect role model
But he doesn't seem to notice
How all the people around him 
Are watching him silently
Wishing they could be
Just like him

He doesn't seem to know
That there are sparks in his eyes
And that he lights up all places 
With the fire that burns on the inside

No, He doesn't seem to see
The man that he is
Standing strong
While holding my hand in his

© 2011 qaralynn


Author's Note

qaralynn
I know..It looks a lot like another poem of mine XD It's just about someone else

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Yup, the ideal role model. I do like the frankness and the simple tone. Great work :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this alot, it it's sorta straight to the point letting him know that he's your role model. (: Love it

Posted 12 Years Ago



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haay everyone, I'm a dutch teenage girl (so please don't mind my bad english) I mostly write to clear my head, because somehow i just can't stop thinking.. XD I like meeting new people.. Feel fr.. more..

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