Once upon a time

Once upon a time

A Poem by Muhammad Qasim
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My happy days seems to be coming to an end!!

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Once upon a time
I was in front of the winning line
I was in a radiant shine

I had the best host
I was all lost

It was my amazing past
It never did last
Like under a magic cast

Just a few many small days
More intimidating than many monthly pays
Only if..it would have made a long stay
It could have made my day

But in the end though
All i had was "more..Oh no"

Very gently
That moved me mentally

© 2013 Muhammad Qasim


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Like Kipling said…victory and defeat are two imposters of life…they are mere illusions for few minutes and that is why one should not affect themselves with their influence but rather move on passing just a glance at them…
Because we have to move on in our life…there is so much more to it…but it is the human nature which compells us to drown in despair and says…"no euphoria in my life is left now" !!
I like the theme of your poem and that third last line the most…i though I would wish you would have ended it in a more strong way…but anyway…the rest is awesome!!!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago

Posted 11 Years Ago


What is life without winning? And what is life without losing? Those are the key essentials of becoming a better person. A better person who can accept the passing of time with grace and without regret, without 'Oh nos':) A thoughful write with a youthful glow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

thank you... :)
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome!

Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

it means A lot :)
A nice poem the theme is strong, at the end poem ends with a weakness... Was hoping for some thing strong at the end

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

i have been told about that before and it's under process about what to do!! :) and thank you foe th.. read more
Akhand Pratap Singh

11 Years Ago

ohk :)
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on February 10, 2013
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Tags: Past, Day, Mentally, Amazing

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Muhammad Qasim
Muhammad Qasim

London, United Kingdom



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