Earth..an amazing playground!

when my imagination ran wild ;)

The sun shining from behind all clouds
Birds chirping all too loud

The moon shining above, without any light
World gone above all height

Kids enjoying many new flavours
just one of many Gods favours

Doors of oppurtunities, opening all around
To this amazing world, we are all bound
Make a horendously high sound
On this wonderful Earth, Gods amazing playground!!

Reviews

[Cindy Marietta]

This was great! Very light hearted and optimistic with a great message. I liked the rhyme scheme as well.

[The Invisible Girl]

Love this! :) keep it up! 100/100

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thanks :D means a lot

[The Invisible Girl]

You're very welcome! :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

:DDDDDDDDDDDDD

[The Invisible Girl]

Lol xD

[Muhammad Qasim]

lmao (^.^) !!

[Mark]

Very nice, and I love the optimistic feel of this poem. Made me feel good. :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you for your wonderful words :)

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Wow! You seem to have a nice perspective of things.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you :)

[The dark story]

it is a very sweet poem carrying a sweet meaning with itself...it is true that thgis world is so mirthful and a sublime priceless gift of God!!nice workl!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

hmm .. Thank you very much :) its true which is why we should change ourourselves

[The dark story]

change ourselves??for what?

[The dark story]

your mmost welcome anyway

[Muhammad Qasim]

By changing ourselvs i mean make ourselve sbetter to survive in this world but alos change it and make it a safer better world

[The dark story]

oh yeah...that's very wisely said...but we all know...these words of wisdoms are not understood by people of todays gen....not understood i mean...people scarcely cares to follow it save a few!1

[Muhammad Qasim]

I know!! that is why we must change it! with the help of the very few who understand

[The dark story]

oh that's a positive answer...very optimistic...but it's not an easy task!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

no task is easy! but wid determination n a strong will.. everything is possible

[The dark story]

That's true…

[Muhammad Qasim]

yeap :)

[Mary Christabel George]

I wish the world was same as you have written.
I appreciate these lines "Kids enjoying many new flavors
just one of many Gods favors".

[Muhammad Qasim]

A book can not be judged by its cover!!

[Mary Christabel George]

Well said...
Also on the basis of experience i guess????
Grinning here....!!!!!!!!!

[InsanityWriter]

Very true. ;) Nicely done, I liked it. ^_^

[Muhammad Qasim]

thanks :)

[Anita Harris]

Love it! Very nice job! :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

oh thanks.. means a lot :)

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right. We should all thank GOD for this lovely place that we lived in~

[Muhammad Qasim]

yeap!! he does not require our worshipping but we need him!!

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right~!

[Muhammad Qasim]

yup :)

[David Scott]

"All Earth declares the beauty of your Holliness."
A psalm king David would be proud of.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Honoured!! :)