Music of the Sky

Naturalistic poem

The song it floats on butterfly wings

amongst the leaves Autumn brings

it dances across the prairies plains

as people pass by, insulate, vane

 

sweet the sound a love song brings

kisses, hugs,life's little things

lost upon deaf ears they sing

Natures players sigh

 

Softly she cries in her robes of white

silencing herself in the stillness of night

yet morning dawn her music resides

Upon the wings sweet birds to flight

 

Now we see those wings clipped

the moon itself slowly does dip

As mother's heart relief does cry

deaf ears the souls of mortals nigh

Copyright 2010

Reviews

[Honey]

ahh.. this was awesome ^0^
(makes me feel bad for being a fail poet tho >->)
that was pretty good
except i think you need to work on spelling.
for example, i think vane should be spelled vain
also, i hope you realize theres a copyright thing right under the writing..
you know, i actually think that that was your only spelling error..
woo! keep writing ^0^
ps, i love the title