Warm Gentle Breeze

Warm Gentle Breeze

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

Warm Gentle Breeze
not warm like muffins
fresh from the steaming oven
tanned, domed caps
more as an infant's breath; close
as taste.
not gentle like downy feathers, nor
mother's soft skin touch, nor as
aubergine dew drops leave traces; but
more as memories conjure dreams un-
awakened and smiling bubbles from the well.
breezes not like those first in Spring from
the south; nor those rare in late Fall 
sixty degrees and lemon chiffon
but like in facing sightless
weight is lifted from shoulders; tension from necks
melting directly into a 
warm gentle breeze
E.
12/20/2016
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image by Jennifer Lommers

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


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oh gosh I know that breeze ... its like the closing your eyes and feeling the universe kiss your cheeks ... I love that moment of melting between me and the rest of reality ... You know when I was in Kyoto, Japan, I was in a Zen temple with a friend of mine and unusually this Zen temple which is usually very busy was momentarily quiet. I sat on the wooden verandah looking out onto the famous zen garden and closed my eyes and that breeze you talk of above, well that's what I felt as time stood still and I gathered up all of my senses to keep that tiny moment with me forever ... ahh ... and wen I close my eyes right now, it's there and it holds that little piece of magic that connects us all.

Thank you for taking me back there ... X

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

ohh yes yes yes my spirit sister :))) exactly ...precious and so quiet .. absolutely try and hold it.. read more



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Transports me to early summer, parked up on the bench in my back garden, only coffee, quiet and the pooch for company. The suns warmth welcomed onto my face as a soft breeze ruffles the leaves overhead... bliss.
Lovely words E


Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yep Gee! that's the place all right ;) thank you so much for your review .. my own pooch is napping .. read more
How to describe the feelings and emotions embodied in a warm gentle breeze wonderful thing to put out there perhaps some Things just aren't describable I love the painting so reminiscent of van Gogh solid bright colors. Is it strange how sights and sounds are the keys to unlocking hidden memories of times gone by

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Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

Tate my friend! so glad you stopped by! yes..the indescribable was my "mission" on this one ..you se.. read more
Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

The picture which I find to be so like van Gogh reminds me of why we like van Gogh so much his pict.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes ...such a pity science and medicine was not as ahead of the times as he ... the leaded paints di.. read more
Such a beautiful poem! It took me to a different, calm place :), felt like a warm gentle breeze indeed.
I love it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

perfect! i could not ask for more ....thank you for walking with me that very fine morning ;) Bella .. read more
this is very beautiful. After a relatively stressful day at work it made me take a deep breath and smile. I especially like the part "more as memories conjure dreams un-awakened and smiling bubbles from the well" because it sounds nice and puts lovely images in my mind. Really nice

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

how wonderful this poem has affected you so ...thank you for reading and sharing your review Ms. D. .. read more
Beautiful Einstein!
I loved how your words gently tug the reader and take us on a walk in a meadow like place, where the nature touches out heart and warmth fill us!
Awesome piece of fresh breeze.
Loved it absolutely!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

Ms. Ablaze!!! what a treat to see you! thanks for taking time ..glad you enjoyed the read and apprec.. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

3 Years Ago

Welcome E! :D
so truly real and vivid. The breeze you speak of is the best kind : ) I absolutely admire your way with words.


Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes...absolutely the best indeed! thank you so much once again my friend! i feel completely gratifie.. read more
This is a lovely gentle poem. 'Smiling bubbles from the well' Love it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

glad you found it to be that Auntie! we experience some things ethereal ..impossible to relate adequ.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

3 Years Ago

It is a good hobby
I really like this, I could feel that breeze myself.
You sure know how to tie words to the senses.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

feeling the "breeze" is what its all about angel .. so thankful that came across for you .. and its .. read more
Extraordinary imagery.
Your creative descriptions almost threaten to improve upon reality.
Lavishly artistic, E!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

you know....I was walking my dog several weeks ago in 60 degree weather .. my dog and our walks many.. read more
Soothing, richly descriptive...home. This is how I feel when my son and I finally step foot in the front door after a long stay in hospital. Beautiful E. R xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

ohhhhhhhhh...wonderful friend! i could not be more gratified and humbled by any remark .. thank you .. read more

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