In Loving God

In Loving God

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

In Loving God
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I let the dogs out this morning  
the sky still dark
the windbreeze pressing the moist fog to my face and mind
it smells like fresh hung linens
the dogs offer lakes and rivers
leave fertile architectures ..... shapes like
The Tower of Pisa, 
                                   the Pantheon,
Pyramids and sprawling ranches ...
they are big dogs with plenty of supplies
thank you oh Lord ... thank you oh Lord
taking once more a deep precious breath 
of my life.
Towers hoisted against forbearing sky - 
mountain's root and nerve the
 oceans' poise ....................
I see .................
an undying accord 
a persistent rapport
The dog chases the trails of nightfall and
I inhale the scents: perpetuity on mortality
So, thank you, oh Lord, for every deep breath of my life
How can one express such splendor 
such vast an expanse in the smallest of life
green shoots and sprouts
clear, clean ice drops .................
one drop of God
on seeking tongues
on bending oak and iron
when our heavy rain enfolds comfort arms
on weathered, rusted roofs ................
God's own assurance melds,
welds the bonds ............
How big you are 
Oh God.
E.
02/23/2018

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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Your poetry a celebration of dawn rising. Your lines elevating my mood. As I respond to you the early sun floods through the upper bay window where we are staying for the week. All is good with my world and that is the feeling your words give me too. We should appreciate the simple things in life. Appreciation of little things can bring contentment in a world where there is such cruelty. We are but specks in the ocean of time. Your poetry, rich with its spiritual thread weaving through its warp and weft.
Thank you Mr E.

Chris

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Einstein Noodle

11 Months Ago

you connect with me ... what a treasure ... God bless your stay and view from that bay window ... so.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

11 Months Ago

Sending all good wishes to you across the pond :)



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NICE poem Einstein. I am not a believer of God but a believer of Mother Nature and it’s marvels. Having a scientific background no one has proven there is a God yet, man wrote the bible and not a good one at that for no one follows the Ten Commandments otherwise the world would be a better place by now. Of course the church hasn’t helped God’s cause. A poem to 🤔

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

so glad you enjoyed despite your position on believing... i think Mother Nature points to a Creator .. read more
andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

I still believe in all things good and having good morals etc, i just don't believe there is an afte.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

we are wee ones ;)
Amazing as always Einstein...great job

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

hmmmmmmm ... thank you very much! i don't recognize your "handle" ...have you changed it? .. definit.. read more
This is awe inspiring..such a beautiful testimonial write if you will..encountering such ethereal fealings in nature and the beauty and joy of loving God knowing his omnipresence ..a true account of everything ..just lovely..

Nice Work Mr E..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you so much Fran...for your encouraging review ..God is good...and ever present eh!? :) thank .. read more
Something about this poem was very musical and inspiring! The imagery you create with your words is beautiful, and the idea of God always being present in our lives is just as wonderful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:) ....yes it is
Such a beautiful hymn of praise. Those moments when the glory rises all around us, those are times we need to breathe in deeply and sense the thankfulness of our hearts rising up to heaven. Glorious words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes, Owl....that's it exactly ..those precious moments eh!? thank you for stopping by always my frie.. read more
An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Peace and joy... and happy Friday, my friend. :)
You have said so well how we are touched by creation......and how that makes us thankful and renders us in awe of the Creator.....

It's the simple things which often remind us of the divine, right?

Posted 1 Year Ago


SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

I've been becoming a workaholic again lately :) To wake up and smell the coffee is refreshing, isn.. read more
SleeplessVolcano

1 Year Ago

Ooops....that smiley face was supposed to be upside down...:(
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:(:)...........................
like the way you laid it out,loved the write

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks wordman! glad you enjoyed reading .. i appreciate your time taken and for letting me know wha.. read more
This was an innocent true love a believer can rely on. There is so much beauty in this poem.
Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a comment.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Oh your welcome Grande ... and thank you as well ... innocence and believing ... make the key to the.. read more
A masterpiece of nature and spirituality, E! There is nothing quite waking up and being out and about when dawn breaks. Whether it be in a city or in the country or even on the shoreline...there is a special silence that is interrupted only by sounds that make us believe we are not alone in this universe. Such an uplifting piece....truly wonderful. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank Lydi! so glad it touched you so ..yes..early mornings are the best ...when the birds are just .. read more
Lydia

1 Year Ago

Absolutely. I go out to get the newspaper and listen to the world. It sounds and feels different.
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:) ..........................
Here, 'In Loving God' you have managed to craft an epic celebration of life in words, my Friend.
This gift has gone some considerable way to helping me realise that despite everything, I am indeed alive and a very lucky man. A remarkable achievement in my book...........All Good Things, Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Neville my friend... how wonderful you found this one to read ... God blesses us truly every moment .. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago

I found it quite invigorating & yes, it certainly did. Peace, Love & All Good Things back at ya....... read more

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