In Loving God

In Loving God

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

In Loving God
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I let the dogs out this morning  
the sky still dark
the windbreeze pressing the moist fog to my face and mind
it smells like fresh hung linens
the dogs offer lakes and rivers
leave fertile architectures ..... shapes like
The Tower of Pisa, 
                                   the Pantheon,
Pyramids and sprawling ranches ...
they are big dogs with plenty of supplies
thank you oh Lord ... thank you oh Lord
taking once more a deep precious breath 
of my life.
Towers hoisted against forbearing sky - 
mountain's root and nerve the
 oceans' poise ....................
I see .................
an undying accord 
a persistent rapport
The dog chases the trails of nightfall and
I inhale the scents: perpetuity on mortality
So, thank you, oh Lord, for every deep breath of my life
How can one express such splendor 
such vast an expanse in the smallest of life
green shoots and sprouts
clear, clean ice drops .................
one drop of God
on seeking tongues
on bending oak and iron
when our heavy rain enfolds comfort arms
on weathered, rusted roofs ................
God's own assurance melds,
welds the bonds ............
How big you are 
Oh God.
E.
02/23/2018

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


Author's Note

Einstein Noodle

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Your poetry a celebration of dawn rising. Your lines elevating my mood. As I respond to you the early sun floods through the upper bay window where we are staying for the week. All is good with my world and that is the feeling your words give me too. We should appreciate the simple things in life. Appreciation of little things can bring contentment in a world where there is such cruelty. We are but specks in the ocean of time. Your poetry, rich with its spiritual thread weaving through its warp and weft.
Thank you Mr E.

Chris

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

12 Months Ago

you connect with me ... what a treasure ... God bless your stay and view from that bay window ... so.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

12 Months Ago

Sending all good wishes to you across the pond :)



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Genuine gratitude for the creator comes from heart, when you appreciate His creation in all its splendor. The morning prayer of yours is a sheer delight to read, and feel the beauty that inspired you. An awesome writing!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

so glad this inspired you Mrudula ... thank you for taking time to review ..it's morning here now so.. read more
Mrudula Rani

1 Year Ago

Your writings are truly inspiring, and it's entirely my pleasure reading your wonderful words.
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you
lovely writing. reads almost like a psalm. a prayer. is a prayer. genuine gratitude and praise. i think he meets us in the seemingly small places & things of life to converse and surely transcends through nature to dwell with us. we humans tend to complicate things. wonderful to step back and just be grateful. beautiful. i love it. bravo!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks for taking time Pete ..i am gratified to the max with your review ..spot on as far as my inte.. read more
Terrific poem, Einstein.
Not to religious myself.
But I felt this one.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

awesome Paul ...there is hope for us yet eh!? ;)))) thank you for reading and letting me know how it.. read more
great writing
..when our heavy rain enfolds comfort arms
on weathered, rusted roofs ................
God's own assurance melds,
welds the bonds ..........

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

hi Cherrie .. thanks for reviewing ... the lines you point out are the ones that i "felt" the most ... read more
what a wonderful start to my day! Thank you :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Emily... so happy you stopped and read this one ... for me personally it is one that is personal and.. read more

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