Earth and Sky

Earth and Sky

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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a haiku

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Eagle wings spread far
Cast shadows on earth from sky
Sharp talons take food
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8/26/18
(I hope you can take time to sit and listen to the video too)

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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I love this video I have watched it many times before and I’ve watched the bald headed eagles in Alaska the most beautiful powerful mystical being ever- sacred to the cultures up Nirth- their piercing cries warns and challenges the spirit as the fly free the king above many- one thing in life we can only be certain of is change- not always easy but best for growth and destiny- difficult paths lead to beautiful places- from pain comes beauty- wonderful words-🌹

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes yes yes! you capture my full intent ... i found the video after the haiku and was as stunned by .. read more


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Majestic birds and worthy of preservation. To be a symbol to a nation says a lot. Masters of the sky. To be mystical to others says a lot. You are soaring as the Eagle good sir and are ready to grab our full attention with your poetry. Video was awesome. I love the music too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks always for reading me Stuff sir! so gratified you enjoyed the stop ... they are magnificent c.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

No doubt my dear sir. You are welcome. Love and peace.
Something majestic about eagles.
Always think the stealth bomber was born from watching the eagle in flight.
Massive Eagles fan.
Once heard a fellow group say they sounded too much like their records. Always thought that was what the fans wanted.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahaha perhaps ... i am also an Eagles fan ... on both accounts ... love the thoughts about the ste.. read more
I don't typically enjoy haiku, but this one was great! It's short but powerful and expressive, great job!

-Chandler

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you Chandler limoncello :) glad you enjoyed .. i love the eagles .. and other large predatory .. read more
i love haiku, but i don't find it always easy to be so succinct. 👍
your poem has multiple interpretations.
cheerio carola
ps. for some strange reason your video could not be centred, so the right-hand side was cut short & not all the writing could be read. don't know if it's my computer or the cafe's website

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Carola! many thanks for reviewing ... i don't think we have met yet ... i will stroll down your way .. read more
I didn't quite get it until I watched the video great short piece

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks for visiting simba! and nice to meet you! i'm gratified you gleaned a bit from the combo ... .. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

i should say ..nice to see you ... ;) we have already met ;}
Amazing video and Haiku E.! The photography in this allegorical tale is spectacular. Eagle- King of the noble raptors...wo-ha-li. The legend, and lesson, here is unforgettable. You beautifully capture with your evocative words, the eagle both in flight and in predation. He is the master hunter in air and sea and on ground. And ultimately, through painfully re-creating himself, he transforms to a bird of peace in order to survive. This is his lesson to us. Deeply moving presentation my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

oh my goodness Annette! your review is giving me chills ... your obvious appreciation of such a grea.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

1 Year Ago

Hi E. It gave me chills too- ha! I felt it was too intense, but wrote it anyway. Your poem obviously.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes! i think so Annette! ... our "animals" choose us eh!?
Both are excellent pieces of ancient wisdom.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ken! you see me don't you?! ;)
E.
You have describes the psyche of the selfish, self seeking go-getters with great aplomb! Indeed their wings cast shadows from afar as they swoop down to take and take some more. Powerful writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

its wonderful how differently we all see things .. i can see your point Mallika .. we can be very se.. read more
θεά 

1 Year Ago

A good poem will always have multiple interpretations. Cheers! Hope you've been swell.
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

sure have ..thank you..and you as well!
This may well be the perfect haiku in terms of the way you have crafted words of the correct number of syllables and form.. However, these words comprise more than just that... You have captured the very essences of one majestic and co-existing whole.. That of Earth & Sky and the majestic eagle that which resides there and is the giver and the taker of life......... The vid was not bad either.. All Good Things my Friend.... Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks Neville ... sure appreciate your friendship and support :) top o' the mahrnin' to ya!
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Neville

1 Year Ago

my pleasure as always.. an have a good un yerself.. N
Wow u so good at haikus too. You captured the scene aptly and awesomely and in a creative way wowww. Kudos and got to read more, this isn't enough from your ink.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

wow! thank you so much for this very encouraging review my new found friend! really happy that you e.. read more

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