A Winter Poem

A Winter Poem

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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Cinquain: poem of 5 lines with syllabic counts of 2, 4, 6, 8 and 2 respectively.... the captcha for this one is "plainish" :))))))))) gotta love it right?!

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My snow
December's moon
Beleaguering too soon
the hearth that holds a fiery heat
now cold
E.
11/12/2018

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
this is a poem i submitted for an on-line poetry class ... (for beginners) ;) and this is the first Cinquaine i have written

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I think it's quite lovely and could easily be a metaphor for love

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

yes ;) thanks Ana! love and peace
E.
A productive exercise. You paint a nice panorama with your cinquain. The format serves as a proper vehicle for eloquent commentary on a heady topic. So impressive your triumph that I sat down and wrote my own first cinquain. Thanks for your inspiring post.




Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

all right!!! i could not be more happy sir! thank you for reviewing and encouraging words ... please.. read more
bigfootprint

5 Years Ago

It is posted. Feel free to have a go at it. It was fun to write. Thanks for the inspiration.
Ah! the thrill of Decembers moon and the luster that it brings along. Usually, this week is my favorite of the year with the thanks and the giving but will all the medical procedures that I'm enduring I think that December Moon is going to be more my friend this year. Though I am still giving great thanks in my life and being a part of this and reading poets like you. I have learned a great deal here and love the Reads, Writes, Reviews! Thanks. E!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thank you Queenie! your comments makes me feel quite connected with you ... i do hope your medical w.. read more
One candle can warm your heart on a snowy day... Winter is a time for reflection and love... your poetry is like warm apple cider
and Snickerdoodle cookies. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear E... as long as we have Snickerdoodles... and a candle to light...
we can drink hot app.. read more
Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

Hope this is not your last Cinquaine...
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

wow! thank you again for your kind and very encouraging words ..no...i will definitely do more ...
how such few words, make me smile
time and time again
maybe I'll never know
dont need to tho
but thank you each time my face contorts like this ............brevitas rules dunnit.... N

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thanks Neville ... i like the form ... using it kind of directed me in a haiku kind of thing .. and .. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

you are write of course, me too.. and a pleasure.. joy and peace sentiment reciprocated... N
Nicely done Sir, and I must say I like this format. I do like the shorter formats that challenge us to speak a volume in so few words. I am duly impressed, but not for the reminder of the chill :)
I might even give it a go myself methinks.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

yes.... the format is a good one .. i will most likely do more ... i like it for those same reasons .. read more
Lorry

5 Years Ago

No doubt itt won't, but hope is free :)
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

:)......................

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