The Deep

The Deep

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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this is a lipogram i wrote for a class (same class the cinquaine was written for) the lipogram, for those who are unfamiliar with, is a poem using one vowel only. i chose "E"

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"The Deep"
The endless Ether
left deep clefts                                        
heed me
keep knees free
                                     enter the descent
                                                                     Hell's decree bends the rent
See me!?
Steep we creep
Spent.
Endless Ether we flee
11/28/2018
E.

© 2019 Einstein Noodle


Author's Note

Einstein Noodle
I struggled to have a theme ... would really like to know if you have a sense of one .. :}

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It’s a different kind of creative joy when we are able to produce worthwhile expression within the limitation of format and structure. For me that’s the supreme kind of satisfaction. I read the endless twists, turns and bends as we navigate, crawl, hurtle through the all pervading ether to our ordained ends. Appreciated very much, E 💕

Posted 1 Year Ago


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DIVYA

1 Year Ago

Oh bedtime then! :)
GoodMorning hugs! And do grab a bit of sleep :))))
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

headed that way now ;)
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

.......😉☺️😊.......



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Writing a lipogram is truly a practice in discipline and good taste.
At the same time such a struggle, not to use words that you find irresistible.
With your poems ( for your on line class) you are teaching me wonderful new lessons.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks for reviewing Mrudula! i appreciate your time taken ... yes! the classes are inspiring and th.. read more
Mrudula Rani

1 Year Ago

Thank you E. At the moment i have very little free time. But the course sounds very interesting and.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks! you are very kind. :)
Now this is clever and different, a anew form to me i must admit and wonderfully done :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks Stella ... I just finished the class this one was used in ... its a free basic class on poetr.. read more
E for vowels and for entertainment. I knew you possess many talents and disciplines, i.e. E for example.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahahahahha :))))))))))))))))))) your review puts a big smile on me face sir! thank you!!!
E.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hahaha. You are welcome...
Very deep and poignant write, here. To be able to do that and stay within the confines of the structure is simply amazing to me. The thought process behind it is intriguing knowing that there was a certain amount of time assigned to come up with just the right words. A great way to start my Monday with!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

your comments bless me Dara...thank you so much for reviewing this one ... it was challenging and re.. read more
Dara

1 Year Ago

Thank you, I think I might have a go at it. Will let you know if I do :-) Yours will inspire me to d.. read more
pretty clever my friend,,liked it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks for reading wordman! and letting me know your thoughts ... so glad you like it ... it wasn't .. read more
 wordman

1 Year Ago

lol,it ain't easy for any of us
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

;) ...................
E is elevating, exciting and engrossing. This is hard to pull off. I will stick with all the vowels (weapons) in this war to Express mysElf. Thanks, Einstein.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahaha as i will as well Max!! we do need all we can get for sure! thank you so much for taking tim.. read more
We are all fleeing death the moment we arrive

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes we are, aren't we...fleeing right into its arms ;))))))))))) luv ya Lyn ...luv ya reviewing alwa.. read more
never heard of it but from what ya say and what I see, you paid more than just lip service to this particular form... even without the explanation tho this would have been a most enjoyable and intriguing write, in its own right... nothing quite like hurtling through ether, ether is there E.... N..... D x

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes it is ..undeniably so Neville ... so much mystery with every breath isn't it my friend ;)))
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Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ps. caught your E...N...D ... you little devil you ;)
Neville

1 Year Ago

ha.. no flies on you my friend.. they used to call me neville the devil... dunno why.. dont s'pose i.. read more
Very Clever Gene, a very smart brevity format delivering as always in the unique Gene style. I like it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

glad you enjoyed reading my friend .. using one vowel only forces a certain brevity i think .. this .. read more
It’s a different kind of creative joy when we are able to produce worthwhile expression within the limitation of format and structure. For me that’s the supreme kind of satisfaction. I read the endless twists, turns and bends as we navigate, crawl, hurtle through the all pervading ether to our ordained ends. Appreciated very much, E 💕

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

1 Year Ago

Oh bedtime then! :)
GoodMorning hugs! And do grab a bit of sleep :))))
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

headed that way now ;)
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

.......😉☺️😊.......

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