My poem is Geometry

My poem is Geometry

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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just a bit of fun :) captcha for this one is "fumbler" ... ;}

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My Poem is Geometry
surgical lines draw
coordinating parallels on
metaphorical axis 
protracting angles
mesmerize my complex balance
of X and Y
internal compilations combust in
black and white my
pointed mind abstactions
obsolete
verbal gyrations this
body of evidence
twist and turn
 
my poem is geometry
and very hard to learn
12/17/2018
E.
Image result for euclidean geometry

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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I loved geometry becuz defining space and objects is tangible, but algebra felt so damn meaningless with x's and y's & no concrete answers! I love your creativity in picking such a relatable idea to write a poem about! I love the way your mathematical terms could apply to many possibilities thru-out life, far from the buttons of any calculator! *smile* Hope your holiday season is sizzling with joy & good eats! I also hope this is a sign you're posting new writing more lately . . . my attendance has been sketchy, but I haven't seen you posting too much for a bit & we miss you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks Margie ... you know i luv ya!



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How cute this one is....and I think any high school student would agree with the last line. Geometry IS very hard to learn and unless one is planning on becoming an engineer, most of it is never used in real life. As an accountant, I used plenty of math, but I never needed to calculate the difference between a scalene triangle and an equilateral triangle! May x plus y always be in balance for you, my friend. I enjoyed this. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahaha you certainly caught the fun of this one Lyd!! as an accountant i am doubly encouraged by yo.. read more
I told my children, everything is math. Math is the working of the body and the movement of the mind. I liked this poem. Difficult geometry, need effort and time to understand and solve. Math is poetry. Thank you Einstein for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

good on you sir! math and science need the push that poetry and creativity can give them .. i was so.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Einstein.
Having somewhat of an ocd numbers kinda brain I can relate to all your angles. I understand the dilemma of the plural of axis - what to do as it is either awkward or up for misinterpretation. But I think I'd do it anyway... either or, nice points.:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahahaha yes indeed ...always up for the interpreting ;)))))) really appreciate your review this mo.. read more
Am still learning the beauty of numbers, how they control the way we think and feel, how certain figures appear as if by magic in our lives. However, that doesnt mean i understand how a subject such as math has any relevance in my dreams" Only during the day when i need to square up to someone or something, or eat less or minus at a loaded buffet. etc. fo i feel an infinity. Whereas you , sir, have played games with colours at conflicting ends of a spectrum and made magic! Nobody should have your quirky outlook.. love it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Hold tight to that feeling, PLEASE..there's little to compare with goooooooooood!
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:) ......................
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Stop it, am laughing again... shhhh
math and surgery,not a bad combination when you`re writing a poem,,creative e

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

i will be all eyes,maybe it will change our lives for the better
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

wouldn't that be a miracle? ..love on ya Word
 wordman

1 Year Ago

maybe a werewolf
Great poem Einstein about a topic most days at school would have us scratching our heads for the answers. Nicely done with great creativity added to the chosen topic at hand.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

like many who have reviewed ..high school math was not my forte' ... but i sure had fun writing this.. read more
Dawn

1 Year Ago

My pleasure Einstein.
This one made me smile. Growing up, I thought the same about poetry and math/geometry, too hard for my little mind lol and although math really isn't what I get even now, my thoughts about poetry have changed quite much. Although there are some poems which still fly over my head (thankfully not this one ;P)
Very powerful and I love your last two lines :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahaha thank you Doc....your visits are a treat :) yes! me too ...math, scinece and writing poetry .. read more
I am really new to this site and I've read lots of your poems and I just wanted to say, I absolutely love them. There's a certain vibe to them that I can't quite name, but they are beautiful and I thoroughly enjoy reading them.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

well thank you Trying! i am glad you decided to review one ... it introduces yourself to people when.. read more
I like the vocabulary and flow of this piece.
Having so many multi-syllabic words in close succession (particularly in the first few sections) make this fun to read aloud in my opinion!
I also like the feel / flow of the final two lines.
A fun, creative poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

spot on Lilly! fun was my intent in writing it ..i also was trying to use more powerful action words.. read more
Not into math but poetry makes much
more interesting I imagine it could be turned
into something romantic and sexy and play
around with the words and numbers.

It's my mood and where
my imagination is lately
But this wasn't boring at
all.

Nicely penned my
friend this has
a very sexy charm
to it👍❤😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

i'm so happy you read the sexiness of it Benita! thank you so much for reviewing
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome ☺ my friend 😁👍 I truly enjoyed reading it.

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