My poem is Geometry

My poem is Geometry

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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just a bit of fun :) captcha for this one is "fumbler" ... ;}

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My Poem is Geometry
surgical lines draw
coordinating parallels on
metaphorical axis 
protracting angles
mesmerize my complex balance
of X and Y
internal compilations combust in
black and white my
pointed mind abstactions
obsolete
verbal gyrations this
body of evidence
twist and turn
 
my poem is geometry
and very hard to learn
12/17/2018
E.
Image result for euclidean geometry

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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I loved geometry becuz defining space and objects is tangible, but algebra felt so damn meaningless with x's and y's & no concrete answers! I love your creativity in picking such a relatable idea to write a poem about! I love the way your mathematical terms could apply to many possibilities thru-out life, far from the buttons of any calculator! *smile* Hope your holiday season is sizzling with joy & good eats! I also hope this is a sign you're posting new writing more lately . . . my attendance has been sketchy, but I haven't seen you posting too much for a bit & we miss you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks Margie ... you know i luv ya!



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Trying to see what angle you're coming from here.
If I start in pub X, move onto pub Y, will I be pie eyed squared, or just GE-O-ME-T-RY.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahahahaha thanks for reviewing Paul ..and try is all, at least me own Da, ever asked ;) love and p.. read more
Extrememly creative! I enjoyed it a lot! c: I personally am bad at math and even basic math haha

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

glad you enjoyed reading JungLee! my own efforts with high school math were embarrassing as well as .. read more
Indeed it’s all about the lines! How they join with other lines! Not forgetting counting those syllables!
Yes word power relies on maths not forgetting the structure. I see the curves in your writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahahaha love it Andrew! we are all just bends in the light ...glad you reviewed this one sir!
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i never learn to love math and geometry of all math subjects.. one my geometry teacher was a loser and second i can't understand the theorems and all so upon reading your poem... all i can say my friend is that it rocks!!! merry christmas and a happy new year to you and stay in good health always

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahaha i am with you on all accounts sette! glad you enjoyed the poem in spite of "school" ... i wa.. read more
Wonderfully penned Einstein Noodle, but you forgot the three dimensional "Z" axis. LOL!

Thought provoking poem. Great job. :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tamara Beryl Latham

1 Year Ago

Nah! Don't bother. The Z axis is only necessary with Calculus and Differential Equations. If you .. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:)...................... you make me belly chuckle ma'am! peace and love to ya!
Tamara Beryl Latham

1 Year Ago

Happy New Year to you. :-)
Unique concept! I like how you relate geometry to poetry and to the struggles of life itself. I wonder if this could have been longer because the concept was so complex? Great read!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes...easy to go on and on i suppose ;) add/subtract math ..algebra, geometry, trig, physics, metaph.. read more
Coffee Lady

1 Year Ago

Haha! Happy unbirthday and Merry Christmass to you as well ...I love Chemistry is Equlity! :)
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:) ......................
OK! mine would be a complex chemical equation that is hard to solve lol though it's funny but brilliantly done, the ending says it all, my originality is "mine", my style is "mine" dare You imitate it, and I dare You to win!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

ahahaha yes Chemistry ... another one of my incompatible subjects in high school ;} but we do change.. read more
Light🌟

1 Year Ago

Oh yes we do change, as everything changes too :)

so nice to meet You too, know and b.. read more
dear E... interesting that I loved Geometry in high school and managed to use a contractor as I tend to be artistic. However I never could get the drift of Algebra ... Margie and I have that in common and other things also. fondly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

i think that algebra by far is the more confusing for sure ;} thanks for reviewing my bit of math fu.. read more
Just like margie just said, I hate math but i liked geometry too! I took algebra 3 times before i passed it and the last time the teacher taught the class in front of my desk!!! This was so clever I enjoyed reading this so much and i'm very impressed with the cross references this was a ballsy undertaking and you pulled it off wonderfully!!! I simply must show this to one of my computer nerd friends i hope you don't mind she will love it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

oh i wouldn't mind at all Bunny! i was the same way with both maths and sciences in high school .. n.. read more
Geometry and poetry both contain the measurements of where we can go. One mentally, the other, emotionally. Although they are just tool, creatively used to fit as we wish. I guess pythagorean theorem could be used to reach the top of euphoria if you know how far away the bottom of despair has taken you. The distance is just a formula away.

Really enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

and i enjoyed your comments Shy ... not sure we have met before ... i will have to stop by your page.. read more

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