Cowboys Only Line Dance

Cowboys Only Line Dance

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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Cowboys only Line Dance

Image result for dancers
Her contemporary footwork slid silk 
across steel grey flint
a hint ...........
she plie'd and squared her hips;
breeze, sway stepping in line
Image result for cowboy dancers
with sublime electric quick draw and
John Wayne swag
He backs up ....
bows his head 
tips his hat and
smiling wide sky charm   -   speaking
milk tongued draaaaaaaaawl .........
says:
"I only line dance ma'am! ....................."
E.
8/22/2019

© 2019 Einstein Noodle


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dear Gene... I met Roger at "Bronco Billy's" in 1987 with a
Band that arrived at seven pm every night.
I had my eyes on a Cowboy at the end of the Bar.
I asked him to dance, and he said, "Not unless they play
"Because of you, God made Oklahoma". I returned to my
Table, thought for awhile, and then asked the Band to
play that song. I have kept him in Cowboy Boots to this day.
He has kept me "In line" ever since. I think your poem is
very whimsical. truly, Pat

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

you are too cool in school girl! :)
Patricia Wedel

10 Months Ago

Yes, dear E.. life is a school where we continue to learn... especially from poetry, we gain a lot o.. read more
barleygirl

10 Months Ago

This is an awesome share, Pat! Such an inspirational pair, you two! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie



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This is both visually and poetically brilliant - love it! Love the pics, the difference one to the other and the near formal compared with the gorgeous line dance guy's cool, ' I only line dance ma'am! ....................."

I did a little ballet when young (a billion years ago) and occasionally go to line-dance evenings, fun and games.. love them both, in spite of their differences. The one flies and swirls, the other glides and stomps.. what a partnership on any floor, be it a twosome or a group-some, come to think of it!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

emmajoy! your review has put a smile on me face and in me heart ... and lifts my own feet to dancing.. read more
Love the David Bowie tune E.! Have never tried line dancing (yet!) but your evocative words and imagery comparing ballet to line dancing is spot-on perfection. Very enjoyable read and now I’ll go buy some snakeskin cowboy boots-ha!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

my Dad bought a pair of cowboy boots when he retired "out West" and swore they were the most comfort.. read more
tween the difference lies a new choreography me thinks:) I got no clue what a line dance is i'm a drummer and a singer so was never very good at rules... like the expression in this

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

if you get a notion to try .. i whole-heartedly encourage you to go for it .. its great fun! i like .. read more
You have captured the essence of MY Space poetry posting with this. I have no idea how you do it. This was endearing.. and a line dance beats no dance!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

Stephany!! great to meet you here at the Cafe' .. and you were/are on My Space??? seems like ages i .. read more
Stephany

10 Months Ago

I was a late comer to MySpace, starting in 2009 before the great implode of 2011. The time spent the.. read more
Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

and that's where i started to learn as well .. i lost what i considered so many friends .. what a bl.. read more
Interesting poem.
Cowboys are who they are reflecting the life they are used to.

Well written and well enjoyed.


Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

thanks Kay..glad you found something to enjoy in this one.. something a little less serious ;)
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Kay Salisu Titilola

10 Months Ago

My pleasure...
Well, being one of those men type things you'll have heard of, I would personally prefer to eat my own feet than use them to dance with.
Just another difference in a long list of differences between us. Women do it properly and we do it just badly enough not to be asked to do it again. You know, like the dishes, cleaning, laundry etc 😀
Always great to see new words from you E.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

ahahaha .. well ... pardner! might just be a time for you to try a new pair of boots and get kickin'.. read more
Lorry

10 Months Ago

Very try E. Where would we be if we were all the same flavour and style. Apart from making ordering .. read more
Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

ahahaha ... i take mine black and strong just this side of bitter ;)
dear Gene... I met Roger at "Bronco Billy's" in 1987 with a
Band that arrived at seven pm every night.
I had my eyes on a Cowboy at the end of the Bar.
I asked him to dance, and he said, "Not unless they play
"Because of you, God made Oklahoma". I returned to my
Table, thought for awhile, and then asked the Band to
play that song. I have kept him in Cowboy Boots to this day.
He has kept me "In line" ever since. I think your poem is
very whimsical. truly, Pat

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

you are too cool in school girl! :)
Patricia Wedel

10 Months Ago

Yes, dear E.. life is a school where we continue to learn... especially from poetry, we gain a lot o.. read more
barleygirl

10 Months Ago

This is an awesome share, Pat! Such an inspirational pair, you two! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
I like this playful western vignette..huba hubba on the cowboy picture..now where did I put my cowgirl boots.I want to line dance now...haha..nice workE

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

well kick up your heels girl .. he's out there somewhere ;) so happy you enjoyed ..your review was j.. read more
  Fran Marie

10 Months Ago

A fun read for sure E..you're so vey welcome my friend
Love the Bowie track Mr E. Your own lines most welcome, it is good to see something new from your pen. I enjoyed this little scenario very much along with your posted images. Never tried line dancing, but I very much enjoy watching it. Love to dance though and do so all the time. Dance in the house when doing my housework while no one's looking:)
Dance to my heart's content. All good wishes.

Chris



Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

rock on Christine .. i love that :))))))))))) hard not to be happy when dancing ... i am so happy yo.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

10 Months Ago

You got it Mr E. Dancing with a flick of the duster and waltzing with the hoover and then rocking wi.. read more
Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

love it dahlink!! you are a corker for sure!
I identify with this one! Less drama and less chance in injuring this aging body. But, writing a poem about it is even better. :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

10 Months Ago

ahahaha yep! great to have your visit R.E. ... thanks so much for your comments!
E.

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