Longing

Tribute to Edgar Allen Poe.. Written in English class

Your smile makes my heart thump like it's about to burst
If I could I would take a knife and cut out my heart and give it to you,valentine,
But the sickness of others has taken what is truly mine
I'm a black abyss going through my days
I sleep next to you in the night, next to skin and bones
I lay and listen to the harsh tones of my blackened heart
The days take forever to end...
One day we shall meet and be together again
The corpse I keep is just an empty shell,full of maggots and a rotten smell
Valentine...
I go to your grave and take this knife
And let the color of scarlet spill over the cold slab below
Again we shall be together with no more sorrow

Reviews

[annabellee]

I really liked it a lot, especially the Poe touch of it, well done :)

[Japanese Cherry]

Oooo, I didn't get to read it before now! Nice nice

[RaccoonFox]

you didn't ? and thanks :3 liked yours too!!

[Japanese Cherry]

Heehee!! Your welcome!

[RaccoonFox]

teehee... Ninjas.. :,D