Does it Hurt?

Does it Hurt?

A Poem by open ended
"

Feel and feel more

"

01-21-‘11


does it hurt

when you're trying?

 

does it hurt

like you're crying?

 

does it hurt

that you're dying?

© 2012 open ended


Author's Note

open ended
i hope you understand that the 'dying' is not meant literally. it is more psychological, spiritual or emotional. try to relate the paragraphs and make out the story behind it. thank you. i hope you leave a review.

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Added on May 20, 2012
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Tags: hurt, emotion, sadness, short poem, paragraph

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