Love

A Love Poem

Define "Love"

Grab a dictionary if you need and tell me,

What do You feel?

I don't know if I've ever been in love,

But when I do fall in love it will be

Beautiful,

        Magical,

               Perfect,

                        Unbelievable,

    and I will know how you feel.

Author's Note

Any problems with the structure here?

Reviews

[Silence Dogood]

not bad Rachelle...

[Titan]

No structure problem at all, I love it! It's a question that many ask themselves. Even after they have been "in love" and broken up, it makes them question if that was truly love or if there is an emotion stronger than what they have experiences. Good job representing uncertainty and hope. I liked it. :)

[Bette]

yes! its all that and some. but its also hard, and painful. lol well done.