Always second best

Always second best

A Poem by rae52
"

feelings i get at school

"

Yeah we’re friends

But not very close

‘Cause in the end

I’m second to everyone else.

© 2013 rae52


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rae52
short and sweet, well not really sweet but what do you think

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Yep, a lot like how I feel a bit back when I had this friend who would just come to me with her problems and then leave once she got her frustration out...kind of annoying, because whenever she'd find something better she doesn't talk to me anymore....I do suggest that if you are going to put a period on your last phrase, you may want to add some punctuation to all the other phrases as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rae52

7 Years Ago

when i'm annoyed i tend to get lazy but thanks
Rose of Gondor

7 Years Ago

lol, same with me. :D I hope things get better!



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A sad but honest write. Well written and heartfelt. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but not at all sweet :P It's actually really sad. I'm not sure if this applies to you but regardless everyone gets to make their own shining moment in their lives :) Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yep, a lot like how I feel a bit back when I had this friend who would just come to me with her problems and then leave once she got her frustration out...kind of annoying, because whenever she'd find something better she doesn't talk to me anymore....I do suggest that if you are going to put a period on your last phrase, you may want to add some punctuation to all the other phrases as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rae52

7 Years Ago

when i'm annoyed i tend to get lazy but thanks
Rose of Gondor

7 Years Ago

lol, same with me. :D I hope things get better!
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Says a lot does this poem..seconf best does suck...always wanna be someones first choice...
enjoyed thoroughly :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bittersweet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poignant well expressed in such a few lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rae52

7 Years Ago

it's not hard to express real feelings not when it happens over and over

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