Dragon, dragon

Dragon, dragon

A Poem by rae52

Dragon dragon
with your fiery breath
your leathery wings 
your scaly  chest

Dragon dragon
you smell of death
you voice it stings 
you giant pest

Dragon dragon
Fly now, begone
Bother not
Town city village
Listen to our song

Hear us
Head us 
Fear us
Fly away now
Don't come back 
Another day

© 2011 rae52


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poor dragon :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's great but *sniff* I dun wanna go! XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh such a wonderful write, don't come back again, love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"giant pest" XD I LOVE how you use "Don't come back/another day" It's from the rainy day song right (forgot the name) It kind of makes you think of another world *dreamy*
~Jasmine Thousand~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LOVED it! I love everything about dragons, and well, this was amazing! I loved the rhyme, the flow, just everything about it! Perfect thing for your book! Can't wait to read it, and I'll soon be accepting read requests, so send me a few more!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really good poem!! I could ( like Blue Fantasy :P) see the dragon flying away in fear...and a big army of weird witches speaking to it...random.... Well done!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Felt like I could see the dragon with your words. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love dragons. They'r'e like, my favorite fantasy creatures besides the phoenix

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hehe...Fiery breath ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Terrific again :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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