Just Friends

Just Friends

A Poem by rachielle

Stanza 1:
Late night chats
What you doing? Where you at?
Getting to know each other
And boy you must know
I cherish you more than I show
But it don't really matter

Refrain:
Don't get me wrong
I think you're getting the wrong impression
I like you
But not how you want me to

Chorus:
I can't love you
More than a friend could do
So can we try to back up
Just a little bit
Try to take a seat think it through
Maybe your head's just messing up with you

2nd Stanza:
Hey what's up?
Got a sec? Can I talk to you?
Can't make this sound better
But this has gone too far
I can tell what's in your heart
Gotta make it clearer

(Repeat refrain and chorus)

Bridge:
Seconds turn to minutes
Minutes into hours
Hours into days
And days turn to weeks
But no matter what you do
This will never push through
Coz I can only love you
Like a friend could do


© 2010 rachielle


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wonderful poem
keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a wonderful poem keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting one ...Sunflower..Sunflower

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'd like to hear this to music as well.
It sounds pretty good and flows decently.

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice. Could definitely hear it to music. sounds good :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great write! I think that a lot of people will be able to relate to these lyrics; I know that it's something that I've had to experience before, definitely. I really like how all of your lyrics seem so general, yet manage to maintain a sense of individuality in terms of the story and the experience that you describe. In this particular piece, I really loved the bridge at the very end. The last couple of lines really hit home for me, because they're words that I've both heard, and have had to say before. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can relate. painfully so.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the structure here, lyrical and poetic:) Great writing!
Love is never easy! lol
Excellent work
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Those folks that want only to be good friends leave us confused and sometime disappointed. A very good poem. The flow was good. like music. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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rachielle
rachielle

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