The Ballad of Edward Scissor Hands part 2

The Ballad of Edward Scissor Hands part 2

A Poem by rachylou
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Based on Edward Scissor Hands movie

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He saw kim love at first sight,

His hands gave kim a fright,

It took a while to get kim calm,

And for her to realise he meant no harm,

Edward was truely in love with kim,

It was unfortunate she had a boyfriend Jim,

Yet what a tale there was to tell,

When the avon lady rang the bell.

 

Kims boyfriend whos name was Jim,

Takes advantage of his hands and him,

To break into his dads house,

They tried to be as quiet as a mouse,

Alarms ring and doors slam shut,

Jim ran, he diddnt have the gut,

Yet what a tale there was to tell,

When the avon lady rang the bell.

 

Edward was caught and arrested,

And then was tried and tested,

After a day they let him go,

They hoped noone would know,

What really happened in the house that day,

So that the others with him wouldnt pay,

Yet what a tale there was to tell,

When the avon lady rang the bell.

 

Before the event he was trusted,

Now they were all disgusted,

He would never again cut there trees,

They did not try to hide thier displease,

They looked upon him with a frown,

And wondered why he was stll in thier town,

Yet what a tale there was to tell,

When the avon lady rang the bell.

© 2012 rachylou


Author's Note

rachylou
1 more part to go :)

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Edward Scissorhands is my favorite! I really liked the repetition of the "Yet what a tale there was to tell / When the avon lady rang the bell" lines. Very enjoyable to read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


this had me smiling a lot. Very inventive. Great write. Enjoyed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


plz review

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Warrington, Appleton, United Kingdom



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