Life's A Painful Thing

Life's A Painful Thing

A Poem by Radrach23
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It's true! written for my band, dead memories, tis a song

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LIFE'S A PAINFUL THING

I see this world through my own two eyes, seein things happenin that make me wanna cry. I see life, I see death, I see so much that takes my breath away. life's something painful at best, but pause a moment and it might be your last

I see babies dyin, mamas cryin, murder everyday, suicide, so i sighed. life's a painful thing.
I see babies dyin, mamas cryin, murder everyday, suicide, so i sighed. life's a painful thing

The world's a dark cruel place, life slaps you in the face when you think otherwise....... watch the world and you will see this is not the way its supposed to be. god never intended it to be like this, when he sees it he gets pissed.


I see babies dyin, mamas cryin, murder everyday, suicide, so i sighed. life's a painful thing.
I see babies dyin, mamas cryin, murder everyday, suicide, so i sighed. life's a painful thing

Why is life so hard? Life's a painful thing...


I see babies dyin, mamas cryin, murder everyday, suicide, so i sighed. life's a painful thing.
I see babies dyin, mamas cryin, murder everyday, suicide, so i sighed. life's a painful thing

© 2010 Radrach23


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you are right life is painful.....and can be very very painful.....yet pain is not the end,,,,darkness can never displace the light...it is the reverse.....what is important...I believe is how we interprete the pain around us.....what effect we allow ourselves to get from it...... having to repeat one of the verses is just cool.....your imagery is real......blessings

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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These truly are terrible things that happen in our lives and in other people's life. It can be chaotic and filled with turmoil. this poem saddens me but take a closer look and sometimes you find wonderful things that happen as well. They don't happen every day and that is sad but there are good people in this world and there are wonderful things that can happen. this poem is written very well and it has made me stop and think about the wonderful things that can and have happened to me in my life during times of less than pleasing events. This is a thought provoking poems that made me look a little closer at life around me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You should put this in verse, songs are still in verse.
Great message. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Freakin' FABULOUS!
I hear the guitars wailing in your voice.
I hear the amps blasting and the moshpit SCREAMING.
I see the shitstorm that life sometimes feels like.
And I see life the way we all dream it could be...
KEEP RAWKIN'!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'd love to hear this song with those lyrics, really cool.
There is so much beauty in this world, and yet, we cannot forget, or ignore this dark side of being human. Its a tough pill to swallow sometime. Keep writing your songs VGirl, the world needs statements like these, that are real, compassionate, and fresh.

Awesome.
Antonio


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you are right life is painful.....and can be very very painful.....yet pain is not the end,,,,darkness can never displace the light...it is the reverse.....what is important...I believe is how we interprete the pain around us.....what effect we allow ourselves to get from it...... having to repeat one of the verses is just cool.....your imagery is real......blessings

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good... I like this; adore the concept and meaning, too. One suggestion though-maybe structuring this like a song/poem would have made this more eye-pleasing to read, but overall, very well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life is not always easy...Nobody said that it was going to be easy and the hard parts makes us into who we are...Very expressive and descriptive write that you have posted here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sunflower

Posted 10 Years Ago


This does have a lyrics feel to it. Life sucks most of the time, yet those few occasions that it doesn't, those are the things we live for. Great Job on this, keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This would make a great song...when it's read aloud, it sounds amazing...this is also sort of sad and a good reminder that everyone has it rough at times

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good lyrical flow. Put that to an accoustic guitar soundtrack and rack up a hit baby! Nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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