My Pap

he died today and things will never be the same

my pap died today
i love you pappy
i will miss you
every single day

your laughs your jokes
like "What's Up?
you being gone
truely sucks

you are the best there is, the best there was, the best there every will be

i will write music
for you
because every time i played
it brought joy to you

why did you
have to go
was it his time?
i guess so

God i know he's
in a better place
now he can meet his maker
face to face

i still
want him here
so i can love on him
and hold him dear

you will always hold a special place in my heart
 
R.I.P. FRANK FRANCI 1924-2010

YOU LIVED A GOOD LIFE

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Aw, I'm sorry, sweetie. It hurts when someone leaves us, but we have to remember that when they do, its to a better and sweeter place. Your Pap wouldn't want you to be sad. Remember your good times but don't forget the bad, and always keep him in your heart.
Wonderful poem :)

[Bob the Unicorn]

Sorry for your loss. Writing is a great way to truly express your feelings and emotions. Excellent poem. :)

[Chloe Christine]

Very nice and heart felt, but again; realllllly choppy. not capitalized, not punctuated, and not edited.

[what-the-frick]

This made me so sad ... I am so sorry for your loss. But I think your poem was beautiful, and I know it makes your Pap proud.

[Darl1ng N1kk1]

Sorry for your loss. I miss my grandpa a lot, too. He died just over 2 years ago and I'm still getting used to him being gone.

[Ashley Black]

im so sorry for your loss good write though

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a great poem to remember a loved one. It lets you see a little of what you Pap was like. The emotion is a little distant but that is fine for the poem's story come through loud and clear.

[Marie Harrison]

So sorry for your loss, but your poem brought a smile to my face. There's so much love and hope in this poem for your Pap. I know he's looking down on you smiling since you wrote this poem for him.

[talulu love]

DANG!!!..sorry to hear that, you know god was looking for his angel...and it was beautiful, the flow was great, you had me crying..lol

[Chris]

Much more beautiful than the other one I read. I feel your grief, and once again I apologize for your loss.

[Lynx]

I don't really know what to say. I'm sorry for your loss, and I hope that you will feel better after a while.

This poem, although technically speaking is not the best poem ever, it is what poems were meant to be written for. They are written to vent our feelings, to make us feel unalone.

At least hey, you've got a lot of good memories of him. No one ever truly dies so long as he/she is remembered.