My Pap
A Poem by
r
he died today and things will never be the same
my pap died today
i love you pappy
i will miss you
every single day
your laughs your jokes
like "What's Up?
you being gone
truely sucks
you are the best there is, the best there was, the best there every will be
i will write music
for you
because every time i played
it brought joy to you
why did you
have to go
was it his time?
i guess so
God i know he's
in a better place
now he can meet his maker
face to face
i still
want him here
so i can love on him
and hold him dear
you will always hold a special place in my heart
R.I.P. FRANK FRANCI 1924-2010
YOU LIVED A GOOD LIFE
© 2021 r
Featured Review
Aw, I'm sorry, sweetie. It hurts when someone leaves us, but we have to remember that when they do, its to a better and sweeter place. Your Pap wouldn't want you to be sad. Remember your good times but don't forget the bad, and always keep him in your heart.
Wonderful poem :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Sorry for your loss. Writing is a great way to truly express your feelings and emotions. Excellent poem. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Sorry for your loss. Writing is a great way to truly express your feelings and emotions. Excellent poem. :)
Very nice and heart felt, but again; realllllly choppy. not capitalized, not punctuated, and not edited.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very nice and heart felt, but again; realllllly choppy. not capitalized, not punctuated, and not edited.
This made me so sad ... I am so sorry for your loss. But I think your poem was beautiful, and I know it makes your Pap proud.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This made me so sad ... I am so sorry for your loss. But I think your poem was beautiful, and I know it makes your Pap proud.
Sorry for your loss. I miss my grandpa a lot, too. He died just over 2 years ago and I'm still getting used to him being gone.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Sorry for your loss. I miss my grandpa a lot, too. He died just over 2 years ago and I'm still getting used to him being gone.
im so sorry for your loss good write though
Posted 14 Years Ago
im so sorry for your loss good write though
this is a great poem to remember a loved one. It lets you see a little of what you Pap was like. The emotion is a little distant but that is fine for the poem's story come through loud and clear.
Posted 14 Years Ago
this is a great poem to remember a loved one. It lets you see a little of what you Pap was like. The emotion is a little distant but that is fine for the poem's story come through loud and clear.
So sorry for your loss, but your poem brought a smile to my face. There's so much love and hope in this poem for your Pap. I know he's looking down on you smiling since you wrote this poem for him.
Posted 14 Years Ago
So sorry for your loss, but your poem brought a smile to my face. There's so much love and hope in this poem for your Pap. I know he's looking down on you smiling since you wrote this poem for him.
DANG!!!..sorry to hear that, you know god was looking for his angel...and it was beautiful, the flow was great, you had me crying..lol
Posted 14 Years Ago
DANG!!!..sorry to hear that, you know god was looking for his angel...and it was beautiful, the flow was great, you had me crying..lol
Much more beautiful than the other one I read. I feel your grief, and once again I apologize for your loss.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Much more beautiful than the other one I read. I feel your grief, and once again I apologize for your loss.
I don't really know what to say. I'm sorry for your loss, and I hope that you will feel better after a while.
This poem, although technically speaking is not the best poem ever, it is what poems were meant to be written for. They are written to vent our feelings, to make us feel unalone.
At least hey, you've got a lot of good memories of him. No one ever truly dies so long as he/she is remembered.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I don't really know what to say. I'm sorry for your loss, and I hope that you will feel better after a while.
This poem, although technically speaking is not the best poem ever, it is what poems were meant to be written for. They are written to vent our feelings, to make us feel unalone.
At least hey, you've got a lot of good memories of him. No one ever truly dies so long as he/she is remembered.
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