Shattered

Shattered

A Poem by Rayne~Drop.
"

Okay...um...well...Not really much to say...But...Yes, I know it's depressing, and sad, and sorta about death and/or suicide...It was MEANT to be that way. Just another poem. Nothing special.

"

Shattered



A windowpane


S    H    A    T    T    E    R    S


Into a


M    I    L    L    I    O    N


Little


Tiny


Pieces.





I stare at the


G    L    A    S    S


And just


W    A    T    C    H


The sparkles,


Rainbows,


And shimmers.





Intrigued,


I pick it up.





I'm


C    U    T


Like a knife.





I stare at the


B

      

       L

             

              O

                    

                     O

                           

                            D


D    R    I    P    P    I    N    G


Down


My


Arm.





Flinch.


Wait for the pain that


N    E    V    E    R        ~      C    O    M    E    S


And just relax.





It's strangely


C    A    L    M    I    N    G


In a way.





Sit down. Stare at the sky. Down at my arm. At the blood on the grass.


It looks like the ground is bleeding.





Cheer up. Blood runs faster. Out my veins onto the ground. So much. Feeling dizzy.


Then nothing.





Black Darkness Surrounds Me.





C    O    L    D.

And


G    O    N    E


And all that's left is a


B    L    O    O    D    Y        ~        S    P    A    C    E


And a


S   H   A   T   T   E   R   E   D    ~    W   I   N   D   O   W


And a


S   H   A  T   T   E   R   E   D       ~       H   E   A   R   T

...



© 2012 Rayne~Drop.


Author's Note

Rayne~Drop.
I DO like some criticism, to let me know about what you people think about the poem. But, if you're just gonna flame it, then whatever. I honestly don't care...So, any ideas on what you think will make future writings better, I wanna hear your opinions.

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I am speechless!!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!! I love stuff like dis. (im a sucker for emo and gothy poems. ...heh... XD) And the font is so freakiing awesomely amazingly KEWL. and i yeah.... i just LOVE THIS. It nearly made me faint, it's so freaking awesome. XDDDD

Posted 13 Years Ago


Holy f*****g s**t, that was emo. XDDDDD Sorry I just had to point that out there... ANYWAY. I like how you did the whole spaces-between-letters thing that you did, and the structure of the poem was good. I liked this, a lot. And don't worry I won't flame you :P I would never flame anything unless it like, totally sucked. :P ANYWAY. I likee! :D

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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Tags: shattered, glass, broken, blood, emo, depressed
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