"Oblivion"

"Oblivion"

A Poem by Rache David
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"What if you end up in oblivion, Where everything totally lost..."

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Day of acquaintance

Exchange names, along with smiles;

Moment of absence

“Goodbye!”  Resonates from ten miles;

Limbo seizes remembrance

Wanders on dark, boundless aisles;

Some will come to pass in oblivion,

Where they will lead to extinction.


 

© 2014 Rache David


Author's Note

Rache David
For those who have been forgotten by people they truly care....
Please check this out...
And comment... :-)

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Your poem is deep, and meaningful. This is a well written poem with good use of imagery.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very relatable and happening to so many. Bravo....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rache David

9 Years Ago

thank you for the comment...
yes it does really happen...:-)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).........
I could relate.
Thought invoking.
Thank you for sharing

Posted 9 Years Ago


I miss many people and I'm sure there are people who miss me.this made me think of them.nice work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rache David

9 Years Ago

thank you.. I think sometimes people tend to forget those they loved before.
And it's not rig.. read more

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Added on September 20, 2014
Last Updated on September 20, 2014
Tags: oblivion, limbo, forget, lost, dark, absence, acquaintance, goodbye, remembrance, extinct

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Rache David
Rache David

NCR, Philippines



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I'm a psychology graduate. I'm 20 years old. I love reading English novels and love to listen to classical musics. I love exploring things. Because I believe there's something more astounding and eth.. more..

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A Poem by Rache David