evil

evil

A Poem by raindroplove
"

thers no words for this

"

is that your head

on the couch

is that your legs

hanging from the door

is that your arms

on the floor

is that a knife

in my hand....opps my bad

© 2011 raindroplove


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lmao i love the last part that made me smile, although it is pretty grim :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


ha! i liked this too, surprising and enjoyable. (if sinister)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hahaha! I found this one funny. Not sure if that was your goal or not. Great idea and well written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good write. Very simple, short but just straight to the point. It just gets there. Nice job, a clever piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LOL, that was good. I didn't expect that at all. I like it as well, clever.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it.


Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the anger and the shock value. I like the idea that you are willing to cross doors and see it from a different view. Good write.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago



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in your pocket, AL



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