our kiss under the sea

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"Hey, silly dont take all the covers " I said

"But am cold " said Zach

" Well so am I"

He tuned over "oh really well come here I "ll get you warm."

so I moved even closer he toke me in his arms

"Are you warm yet?" he asked after a few minutes  

 I was but I wanted to  be close to him so I  lied.

"No, I'm still cold."

So he pulled the covers over are heads. After a few minutes he asked again

"Are you warm yet."  

I was  warm but again I didn't want to let go so again I lied.

" No..."

He pulled me tighter.

" Are you warm yet " he said looking at me with his deep blue eyes

" .......no"

Then he kissed me.His lips soft on mine. Then after we parted he asked one more time.

"Are you warm now...."

"Very..."

Then he kissed me one time

" Kristen, I love you"

" I love you to Zach "

 

 

 

Author's Note

this was my dream last night..... i wishing it would happen!!!!

Reviews

[Draven]

Yes, that was so adorable and romantic. I like it.

[JUSTWRITING]

Oh, it's so cute! But I agree with Zardeuz, there are grammatical errors, and spelling mistakes.

[Michael.]

You need to correct a few spelling and grammatical errors. I can kind of see what you're going for but try to describe the mood a little better so we all can.

[Just a Dream]

awe that is so sweet ily

[Kiari Sabon]

aww its real nice :}

[GlamGirl]

So cute!!! I would love to have a dream like that. Lucky!

[brenda]

aaaw this is so sweet!!!! love the poem!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe :)
This was such a cute story. I loved it. :D